Hi all,
Here's the first two parts of a story I'm working on. I would just love some feedback on it.
Without describing it or giving anything away, I would be interested what your immediate thoughts are after reading it.
Thanks!
Part 1:
http://www.literotica.com/s/a-cheaters-regret
Part 2:
www.literotica.com/s/a-cheaters-regret-pt-02
Here's the first two parts of a story I'm working on. I would just love some feedback on it.
Without describing it or giving anything away, I would be interested what your immediate thoughts are after reading it.
Thanks!
Part 1:
http://www.literotica.com/s/a-cheaters-regret
Part 2:
www.literotica.com/s/a-cheaters-regret-pt-02