Editor needed

Hi,

Been a lit reader for a long time and have finally tried my hand at writing. Would love someone to give it a once over and let me know any shortfalls you see. It will be in the Loving wives section if it were to be published. let me know if you're interested.

Thanks

Cage030

Can Edit

I can edit the story . Feel free to checkout my profile in the volunteer editors list. Also you can mail it to me and i can respond accordingly .. my email add is * personal info prohibited per forum guidelines