The Naked Party Thread

TE999 said:

Thanks darlin'. I appreciate it.

The trolls nailed me too--I'm below 4.00 for the 3rd time. Even the sweeps don't help.

It's an instant replay of my Loving Wives Christmas story entry. Only with less hate mail.

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TE999 said:

Thanks darlin'. I appreciate it.

The trolls nailed me too--I'm below 4.00 for the 3rd time. Even the sweeps don't help.

It's an instant replay of my Loving Wives Christmas story entry. Only with less hate mail.

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TE999 said:

Thanks darlin'. I appreciate it.

The trolls nailed me too--I'm below 4.00 for the 3rd time. Even the sweeps don't help.

It's an instant replay of my Loving Wives Christmas story entry. Only with less hate mail.

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SweetWitch said:

Do they still have sweeps after installing the new voting system?

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SweetWitch said:

Do they still have sweeps after installing the new voting system?

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secretme said:

I waiver around 4.45. It's the only thing I've posted that I actually put effort into that doesn't have a pretty little red H. Ah well. I don't think the score would be that low if it weren't in the contest. I know it's not GREAT. But I don't think it's as bad as some of the nasty anonymous people are suggesting. I can't wait to see who wins though. I'm dying to read what a winning story around here is like.

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secretme said:

I waiver around 4.45. It's the only thing I've posted that I actually put effort into that doesn't have a pretty little red H. Ah well. I don't think the score would be that low if it weren't in the contest. I know it's not GREAT. But I don't think it's as bad as some of the nasty anonymous people are suggesting. I can't wait to see who wins though. I'm dying to read what a winning story around here is like.

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secretme said:

That was a short read. I do admire people who can write shorts. Mine always just keep going and going...
Not that stamina is at all bad under the right circumstances!

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TE999 said:

Yep--but they often do more harm than good. After the last one my V-Day score still sucks--plus I lost 3 'H's on earlier stories.

Go figure.

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JackofMyTrade said:

You know, it's interesting you should say that. The really good stuff comes from just writing what's there IMHO, and not trying. Your best stuff flows beutifully and there doesn't seem to be too much effort evident.

Did you step outside your comfort zone when you wrote your submission?

- Jack

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secretme said:

Hi Jack! Welcome to the naked party. Clothes go over in that corner over there. Rolf serves the drinks.

ROLF! We've got a newbie.
Whatcha having Jack?


As far as that submission goes, yeah I was a bit out of my element. It just kinda happened after an argument I had with a friend where I told her I couldn't ever write an incest/taboo piece. And notice that the sex scenes written out were not within the family... I don't know... I've done better. Done worse. Will do more.

How's your night going?[/QUOTE

Thanks.

I'd like a Screw driver please

I'm sure you'll do much better.

My night is going well. Sitting at my computer Naked while dinner cooks.

How's your night going?

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secretme said:

I haven't lost any H's over the new sweeps but my scores did drop significantly. I had a couple that were at 4.95/96 and everything's under .90 now...

I wonder what exactly the sweeps do?
I half think they're just taking the top numbers and the bottom numbers and getting rid of equal amounts under the assumption that some of them have to be bad so they might as well get rid of all of them... Who knows.

It's not really the point anyway. I'm more interested in the comments and feedback than the scores. But the v-day comments and feedback have had the random poopy mean guy just being mean...

Luckily I don't scare easily! If they don't like it they don't have to read it!
I'm still posting!

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TE999 said:

Now that's the spirit. I write for the sheer fun of it and sharing it with others. If they like it--fine--if they don't--oh well, on to the next one. I actually enjoy the comments from other authors on my work as well as those from my readers. I consider it an honor that they take the time to read my work and comment.

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JackofMyTrade said:

secretme said:

Hi Jack! Welcome to the naked party. Clothes go over in that corner over there. Rolf serves the drinks.

ROLF! We've got a newbie.
Whatcha having Jack?


As far as that submission goes, yeah I was a bit out of my element. It just kinda happened after an argument I had with a friend where I told her I couldn't ever write an incest/taboo piece. And notice that the sex scenes written out were not within the family... I don't know... I've done better. Done worse. Will do more.

How's your night going?[/QUOTE

Thanks.

I'd like a Screw driver please

I'm sure you'll do much better.

My night is going well. Sitting at my computer Naked while dinner cooks.

How's your night going?

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Hey Jack. Welcome to the Naked Party and the AH.

Hope you have an apron. Those spatters hurt like the dickens.

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SweetWitch said:

I just commented on yours. I so had you pegged. You ain't right in the head.

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TE999 said:

Now that's the spirit. I write for the sheer fun of it and sharing it with others. If they like it--fine--if they don't--oh well, on to the next one. I actually enjoy the comments from other authors on my work as well as those from my readers. I consider it an honor that they take the time to read my work and comment.

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SweetWitch said:

I just commented on yours. I so had you pegged. You ain't right in the head.

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Emperor_Nero said:

I feel the same way ... although it does hurt a little that my Valentine's story is doing poorly. Keep hovering around 4.20 and have almost as many votes as the rest of my stories combined ... but only three PCs the last time I looked

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Emperor_Nero said:

I feel the same way ... although it does hurt a little that my Valentine's story is doing poorly. Keep hovering around 4.20 and have almost as many votes as the rest of my stories combined ... but only three PCs the last time I looked

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secretme said:

I've got 22 PCs. Some pretty fun. You should take a look. It'll make you feel better about only having three. as long as they're nice ones. I haven't deleted anything. Although this is the first time I've considered it...

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Emperor_Nero said:

I feel the same way ... although it does hurt a little that my Valentine's story is doing poorly. Keep hovering around 4.20 and have almost as many votes as the rest of my stories combined ... but only three PCs the last time I looked

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Emperor_Nero said:

I feel the same way ... although it does hurt a little that my Valentine's story is doing poorly. Keep hovering around 4.20 and have almost as many votes as the rest of my stories combined ... but only three PCs the last time I looked

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TE999 said:

JackofMyTrade said:

Hey Jack. Welcome to the Naked Party and the AH.

Hope you have an apron. Those spatters hurt like the dickens.

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LOL, good thing I"m not frying anything up.

You know Secretme, The sex you did put in that story was great. I know I've not posted many stories, but I think I'm going to try my hand at a submission along the Incest lines and see how well I can do. I would love your feedbak on the one submission I did make though.

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