FEMALE editor for woman's point of view review wanted

I'm male. I write women's fiction but usually from a 3rd person POV.

I have a story (23,000 words) which I am considering submitting to the board. However, this particular story is my first attempt at 1st person female POV. All characters are 20+ years old.

I would like to find a female editor who can give me pointers so that I can correct any testosterone caused mistakes.

As I said, 23,000+ words. Step-family Incest category unless there's a better choice on where it should go.

An excerpt to prove it's not just crap:

Sin's eyes rolled back down and she looked at me from three inches away, giving me a smile. That smile. The one that made my heart do flip flops.

"Hi."

"Hi back. Did you know you're beautiful?"

She blushed.

"You're beautiful. You're pretty and smell fantastic. You taste even better and I love you. How much more could a girl want from her mom?"

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The story has some fantastical elements but it's not zombie/vampire/werewolf-y. I think it's totally believable in context with the universe it's set in but what do I know. *shrug*

Anyway, anyone interested in being a beta reader/editor give me a PM.

Thanks.

*edit here*

My current work/home schedule is crazy. I'm not always on the board so please be patient, I WILL get back to you.

Editor found.