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John988
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I posted a story at the beginning of July about a college girl taking pictures for her boyfriend and masturbating. It's quite short and very much intended for those simply looking to get off. It was not very well received, though, and, to date, only has 9,755 views and one favorite, with an average rating of 2.89. And no comments. Obviously, I messed something up.
I am still fairly new to writing erotica, but my other two stories were received much better. I love writing, and, because I find this genre to be a lot of fun, I want to grow in it. To do so, I would greatly appreciate any and all feedback you have to give me. It can be short, sweet, and to the point, or you can send me an essay analyzing the way it portrays the female orgasm.
Whatever you have to say, please be honest about it. This story did poorly, and it's important for me to know why. It is titled Digital Love and can be found here: http://www.literotica.com/s/digital-love.
I am still fairly new to writing erotica, but my other two stories were received much better. I love writing, and, because I find this genre to be a lot of fun, I want to grow in it. To do so, I would greatly appreciate any and all feedback you have to give me. It can be short, sweet, and to the point, or you can send me an essay analyzing the way it portrays the female orgasm.
Whatever you have to say, please be honest about it. This story did poorly, and it's important for me to know why. It is titled Digital Love and can be found here: http://www.literotica.com/s/digital-love.