There is no story right now for anyone to look over, but I just wanted to get a general sense of something.
I am writing a story, I guess it could qualify as erotica. I find it fairly appealing, but I was wondering if it the topic would have any sort of mass appeal.
The story is basically a coupling of two very horrible people. They are unrelatable but somewhat realistic, they are very ego driven hedonistic sociopathic criminals. The basic story is that a mafia money launderer(the woman) gets married to a mafia hitman who she is attracted to because he murders people. She hits him and scratches him in order to piss him off so that he will have brutally rough sex with her. They get divorced once he stops quits being an assasin and she taunts him by fucking men and calling him leaving messages on his phone of her fucking men that she knows. He resists killing anyone, due to him actually not caring about her anymore.
Then she is caught embezzling money from the mob and offers "anything" the hitman wants from her if he kills about seven people in short succession to prevent the mob from killing her and her family. He does what she wants(Killing his former employer among others) and in return she becomes subsurviant to his every demand.
The story started off as an excersize in writing a story in first person(it isn't done yet.) It is from the perspective of a horrible, horrible person and it is basically mostly about doing whatever you want for completely selfish purposes. My idea was to let readers kind of escape their own paradeim of morality and kind of live vicariously through a completely hedonistic person(s), with absolutely no limits to their actions.
My question is basically: Is there any appeal to a story with two completely horrible people in an ubelievably messed up relationship, who have unbelievably messed up jobs and who only care about themselfs? Is any of this erotic in anyway? Honestly I am not sure myself. I guess it's kind of an anti-love story.
I am writing a story, I guess it could qualify as erotica. I find it fairly appealing, but I was wondering if it the topic would have any sort of mass appeal.
The story is basically a coupling of two very horrible people. They are unrelatable but somewhat realistic, they are very ego driven hedonistic sociopathic criminals. The basic story is that a mafia money launderer(the woman) gets married to a mafia hitman who she is attracted to because he murders people. She hits him and scratches him in order to piss him off so that he will have brutally rough sex with her. They get divorced once he stops quits being an assasin and she taunts him by fucking men and calling him leaving messages on his phone of her fucking men that she knows. He resists killing anyone, due to him actually not caring about her anymore.
Then she is caught embezzling money from the mob and offers "anything" the hitman wants from her if he kills about seven people in short succession to prevent the mob from killing her and her family. He does what she wants(Killing his former employer among others) and in return she becomes subsurviant to his every demand.
The story started off as an excersize in writing a story in first person(it isn't done yet.) It is from the perspective of a horrible, horrible person and it is basically mostly about doing whatever you want for completely selfish purposes. My idea was to let readers kind of escape their own paradeim of morality and kind of live vicariously through a completely hedonistic person(s), with absolutely no limits to their actions.
My question is basically: Is there any appeal to a story with two completely horrible people in an ubelievably messed up relationship, who have unbelievably messed up jobs and who only care about themselfs? Is any of this erotic in anyway? Honestly I am not sure myself. I guess it's kind of an anti-love story.