First time poster, long time reader, in desperate help of someone who can help me with some comments/ideas on breaking up a story that has multiple present/past jumps.
The story itself is not explicitly sexual, nor does it need to be... it's more of a personal essay on a Sex Club Experience and the chain of events (from a life-perspective) that got me there. Length is ~5k words. Would appreciate the help of this community with this ask. Thanks in advance!
PM me if interested, will send text file (PDF/Word/GoogleDOC).
The story itself is not explicitly sexual, nor does it need to be... it's more of a personal essay on a Sex Club Experience and the chain of events (from a life-perspective) that got me there. Length is ~5k words. Would appreciate the help of this community with this ask. Thanks in advance!
PM me if interested, will send text file (PDF/Word/GoogleDOC).
