'Alex': A Novella

Hi there,

I've just overhauled and (finally) completed my 2009 V-day contest winner, 'Alex'. But I feel like there's something missing. I'm not sure what it is, though, so I'd like a talented editor to have a look and pass along some pointers, if possible.

Any questions, let me know!

Cheers.

Category and wordage?

Lesbian sex. 40K.

Thanks!