The Life Aquatic with Susan Langdon.

PrevertOne said:

My latest story https://www.literotica.com/s/the-life-aquatic-with-susan-langdon has been published. I would like to thank Yorkie Chai for the edit. Feedback is appreciated. The picture and artist on which this story is based can be found on Hentai Foundry. Thank you

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AwkwardMD said:

The people on this forum who offer feedback are other authors (and one passive/aggressive bratty bi slut (her words, not mine)) who have their own writing as well. We give our time to help new authors because it can be completely demoralizing for a new author to look at the balance of time spent working on your art against the depth of the responses said art generates. We have all been there, feeling low because no one recognizes how brilliant our True Lies reference was that, three years later, NO ONE HAS EVER COMMENTED ON. YOU SAVAGES.

That being said, you are running perilously close to abusing our generosity. You ask for feedback on stories and you aren't contributing feedback to anyone else. This forum only works because some of us are donating time. It's like a food bank, and you keep taking and taking.

If you want more feedback, you should give some too.

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