Carnevil9
King of Jesters.
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There's a thread over in the Fetish and Sexuality Central forum called "Married Man Handjob," started by a woman who claims that she likes going into restaurants, finding a married man, dragging him into the bathroom, and stroking him off. Then sending him back to his wife before he is missed.
That gave me an idea for a story: The Handjob Contest. Two girls (basically, pretty slutty ones) have a contest: who can stroke off the most men at a bar/club/concert/restaurant, whatever. Maybe it is only for one night; maybe it takes place over a longer time. They have to find a man, take him somewhere at least semi-private, jerk him off into their hand, and then bring it back for the other one to see it (and then swallow it down if they like).
If I were writing it, I’d start the story in mid-stroke, with one of the women stroking off her first conquest in a closet or back room or restroom stall. The reader wouldn’t know what was going on, of course, other than just a handjob. Until she goes back to the bar or table where her friend is waiting, shows her palm full of spooge to her friend, and says, “That’s one for me!” or something like that. Then slurping it down.
I'm not sure where the “drama” or conflict in the story would come from, but even if it’s just a lot of jerking off, it could be an interesting story!
Any thoughts? Embellishments? Additions or enhancements?
That gave me an idea for a story: The Handjob Contest. Two girls (basically, pretty slutty ones) have a contest: who can stroke off the most men at a bar/club/concert/restaurant, whatever. Maybe it is only for one night; maybe it takes place over a longer time. They have to find a man, take him somewhere at least semi-private, jerk him off into their hand, and then bring it back for the other one to see it (and then swallow it down if they like).
If I were writing it, I’d start the story in mid-stroke, with one of the women stroking off her first conquest in a closet or back room or restroom stall. The reader wouldn’t know what was going on, of course, other than just a handjob. Until she goes back to the bar or table where her friend is waiting, shows her palm full of spooge to her friend, and says, “That’s one for me!” or something like that. Then slurping it down.
I'm not sure where the “drama” or conflict in the story would come from, but even if it’s just a lot of jerking off, it could be an interesting story!
Any thoughts? Embellishments? Additions or enhancements?