Darkness, Demons and Inner Dialogues

FUS_LEr said:

Look, people fall in love all the time
People fall out of love all the time
Given the shit ton of people in this world
Someone somewhere is getting their stupid heart broken.

It's all terribly commonplace.
There is nothing special about your love.
There is nothing special about your heartache.
No one gives a damn about your over-worked emotions.

This is the simple truth.
No one will miss you when you are gone.
He won't care if you died.
He didn't even give a fuck that you existed at all.

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cherries_on_snow said:

Probably true.

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FUS_LEr said:

*About 700 erased and edited lines later*

Just a few random, rather poor pieces. Am I looking for feedback? I am not quite sure.

I suppose if I am writing, might as well get better at it. I suppose feedbacks are welcome... Till they are not.

I just need a little nook, to nest and hide, and write.

Because sometimes, that is all that we have.

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UnderYourSpell said:

Hello and welcome, I hope you stay and write but most of all read. There are some wonderful poets here and I don't just mean those posting in New Poems (although there are plenty of our residents posting there also) but the majority on there just post and run they don't bother to come in here.

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