AlexBird22029
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Hi Literoticans,
I've just started writing a new series called The Loyals which follows a couples exploration of the SPH and interracial cuckolding fetishes. The first part was published this morning and I would love to get some feedback from anyone who might be interested in that genre.
I've not written much before so I'm still finding my feet. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated.
It's quite a long story, I have a rough idea of at least seven chapters and it would build up gradually to an intense ending. What I'm really looking for is whether it is a good fit for Literotica of whether I have gone too slow on the first chapter.
Here it is: https://www.literotica.com/s/the-loyals-ch-01
Would love to hear your thoughts.
Thanks,
Alex
I've just started writing a new series called The Loyals which follows a couples exploration of the SPH and interracial cuckolding fetishes. The first part was published this morning and I would love to get some feedback from anyone who might be interested in that genre.
I've not written much before so I'm still finding my feet. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated.
It's quite a long story, I have a rough idea of at least seven chapters and it would build up gradually to an intense ending. What I'm really looking for is whether it is a good fit for Literotica of whether I have gone too slow on the first chapter.
Here it is: https://www.literotica.com/s/the-loyals-ch-01
Would love to hear your thoughts.
Thanks,
Alex