Hot4TS2003
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- Mar 16, 2006
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I wrote a story (Gay Male) that received some good feedback and a 4.63 score. Encouraged, I wrote a second story that I thought was better, and a sequel to the first that I thought was "hotter" than the original. Both are hovering at 4.47.
Now, 4.47 is a B+ - so not bad, I know.
BUT. I want to improve, not go, you know, the other way.
SO. What do I need to know? What will make future stories better?
More character development? Less?
Is it the plotting? The pacing? The tone?
Is it the descriptions of sex itself?
Please be specific - if you can! I would like to, ahem, nail this.
Two of the three are quite long, so helping me out is a bit of an investment of your time. (But maybe there's a happy ending in one of them for you?!?)
Anyway, here's a link to my Author page, with all three.
Thanks in advance!
Now, 4.47 is a B+ - so not bad, I know.
BUT. I want to improve, not go, you know, the other way.
SO. What do I need to know? What will make future stories better?
More character development? Less?
Is it the plotting? The pacing? The tone?
Is it the descriptions of sex itself?
Please be specific - if you can! I would like to, ahem, nail this.
Two of the three are quite long, so helping me out is a bit of an investment of your time. (But maybe there's a happy ending in one of them for you?!?)
Anyway, here's a link to my Author page, with all three.
Thanks in advance!