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Old 05-25-2018, 07:20 PM   #26
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That's not enough for me, as a writer or as a reader. The how of the situation is crucial for me to enjoy it. It can be an unlikely explanation, but there needs to be one. Otherwise, it's like writing about a man with an arm growing out of his head: you can write it, but a reader is going to need to know HOW the man ended up with an arm growing out of his head. Otherwise it makes no sense.

But maybe that's just me. To each their own kinks.
Various readers respond to various setups. Some want to know in detail the why, the motivation, or watch it unfold before their eyes. Others won't care much, focusing on the resultant action and/or consequences.

But yeah, at least some trigger mechanism is needed to justify the taboo violation. Throwaways like, "They've been at it ever since they fell into the jello bath" and, "They saw each other naked" definitely fail. The old "Mom in Sonny's lap" trick could suffice.

But their ages need adjustment for any setup. If he's 21, they've only been at it three years, when she was 47; he was born when she was 29. Shrink the age gap. She's 44, he's 24 (still living at home because nearby college), and six years ago she first sat in his lap or needed pool help. Maybe they were tricked into that first fuck. Whatever. That's the past. Action is NOW.
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Old 05-31-2018, 05:03 PM   #27
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Preferred incest moms

I would just like more stories with mom being an attractive, but realistic looking, middle aged woman in her forties or fifties, in middle class suburban America, usually conservative in her outlook and dress, but prone to hot incestuous sex with her son and maybe her daughter,. FFM threesomes are fun. How did mom go from fucking her son to including his girlfriend/wife or neighbor lady in the fun?
Nice tits are a must. I suspect most of us oedipalists are tit fans. And a well described moment of truth when her son’s cock is actually in her pussy!
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Old 06-01-2018, 03:22 PM   #28
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I have found that the momcest stories I have most enjoyed fall into two polar camps. There are the situational stories, like the lap-sitting scenario, costume party mix-up, or trapped in a closet, in which the author uses an unusual situation to put mom and son into an arousing position together. These tend to build quickly to a hot climax. The others are the exquisite "slow burn" stories or series, in which the characters' internal conflicts between love and lust, guilt and desire, are explored in depth before the characters give in to the irresistible physical need and the tension released.
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Old 06-03-2018, 07:11 AM   #29
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That's not enough for me, as a writer or as a reader. The how of the situation is crucial for me to enjoy it. It can be an unlikely explanation, but there needs to be one. Otherwise, it's like writing about a man with an arm growing out of his head: you can write it, but a reader is going to need to know HOW the man ended up with an arm growing out of his head. Otherwise it makes no sense.

But maybe that's just me. To each their own kinks.
Hoo... bloody... ray. Amen to that. No, it's not just you.

How good it is to see the occasional person mentioning the importance of plausibility! I'm afraid, in my book, if you're the kind who's turned on by simplistic descriptions of fucking, you have no right to call yourself a 'reader'... and you're not a writer if that's all you're capable of producing.

The whole point of the storyteller's craft is to... tell a story. If the 'Lit' part of this site's name is to be believed, it surely has something to do with that.

In the stories I write (for myself) there is often an element which borders on the surreal, I admit that fully - even if I have yet to explore the wonders of arms growing out of heads. There's little point in writing if you shy away from new possibilities and ideas. Having said that, I try to ensure that the reader is led gently into acceptance of these ideas. You set the scene, you add plot and character detail. You keep it as close to the reader's frame of reference as possible... while gradually introducing whatever strangeness you have in mind.

Carnevil, I salute you. Hopefully there are more people out there who think the same way.

To judge by the vast majority of the puerile shlock on here posing as 'stories' though, I rather doubt it...
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Old 06-03-2018, 01:15 PM   #30
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Not criticizing any one else's kink but I am really curious as I just don't understand the appeal of incest?

What is it about this that appeals to you? Do you find your own mother sexually attractive?

You don't have to answer but I assure you I mean no disrespect I'm just curious.
It's a little bit "what if?", it's a road not travelled that never will be travelled, it's a little bit the taboo, and it's a little bit "how do I get my characters over this hurdle?". To me that kind of story is just more interesting than "Two normal adults meet, decide they want to bang, and then bang."
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Old 06-03-2018, 01:27 PM   #31
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Not criticizing any one else's kink but I am really curious as I just don't understand the appeal of incest?

What is it about this that appeals to you? Do you find your own mother sexually attractive?

You don't have to answer but I assure you I mean no disrespect I'm just curious.
It is an acquired taste..the incest category here.

I do not desire to commit the act nor do I desire my mother in anyway. But, to this day incest is one of the most (if not the most) popular category on lit. Stats show it is second to erotic couplings.

However, I have a inclination that more people read incest here.
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Old 06-03-2018, 03:04 PM   #32
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Stats show it is second to erotic couplings.

However, I have a inclination that more people read incest here.

More stories are published in the erotic couplings category, but incest stories are much more popular in that they get more viewers, by far.
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Old 06-03-2018, 04:35 PM   #33
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More stories are published in the erotic couplings category, but incest stories are much more popular in that they get more viewers, by far.
For the maximum views but nasty jabs, post in LW. For many views and good scores, pander to Incest readers. Motherfucker! For fewer views but better scores, pander to minor categories. I've prospered in Group, where readers tolerate some fetishes and trumps pretty well as long as they're minor themes. And hey, the more, the merrier!
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Old 06-04-2018, 07:15 PM   #34
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Not criticizing any one else's kink but I am really curious as I just don't understand the appeal of incest?

What is it about this that appeals to you? Do you find your own mother sexually attractive?

You don't have to answer but I assure you I mean no disrespect I'm just curious.
I have no interest in my mom. I did have that brief phase as a kid, but shook myself out of it. I don't mind reading momcest and have taken to writing it. It's something I'd rather read or watch. Now I have two sisters I wouldn't mind fucking and possibly a cousin. I have a godmother I'd fuck, but that's not real relations, plus she's an amputee, which is a fetish of mine, anyway.

To the OP; I have read some, some were okay. I have some incest, one of which I think is a bit convoluted, that has to do with a shed. I have one actual, just straight up... momcest...it's one chapter so far, but I've started back writing and have done chapters two and three and just need internet to post it. It's probably one of my best stories on here, not because of subject, but how it's done.

...aaannndddd... I just got another idea for a momcest story. Which like a few stories will be written on my phone, out of convenience.
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Old 06-04-2018, 07:40 PM   #35
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I have found that the momcest stories I have most enjoyed fall into two polar camps. There are the situational stories, like the lap-sitting scenario, costume party mix-up, or trapped in a closet, in which the author uses an unusual situation to put mom and son into an arousing position together. These tend to build quickly to a hot climax. The others are the exquisite "slow burn" stories or series, in which the characters' internal conflicts between love and lust, guilt and desire, are explored in depth before the characters give in to the irresistible physical need and the tension released.

One reader had a phrase that stuck with me, that I often repeat, which is "necessity"

ie there was an experimental drug, herbal medicine, or anything or urgency which pushes them to have sex,which they end up loving.

It's a widely popular concept
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One reader had a phrase that stuck with me, that I often repeat, which is "necessity"

ie there was an experimental drug, herbal medicine, or anything or urgency which pushes them to have sex,which they end up loving.

It's a widely popular concept
Throw dad or son into ice water so daughter or mom must snuggle the guy naked in a sleeping bag to restore body temperature. Fucking ensues, of course. Or think of another emergency trigger. Why MUST you snuggle with kin naked? Hiding in a tent on Black's Beach to avoid venomous snakes?
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check out Family Therapy on PornHub, if you're into that kind of thing
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What dad doesn’t know!

I love when mother and son are fucking behind dad’s back.
Mom visits her son away at college once a month. Dad thinks that is on the helicopter parent side. Mother and son think it’s on the incestuous orgasmic side.
Mother and son go away on vacation while dad is stuck at his corporate drone job.
Mother and son love to play touchy feely grab ass grab boobs grab cock when dad is only in the next room.
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“We’ve been found out!”

A story, even a series of stories of mother and son incest couples found out by someone else and the consequences. Maybe found out by husband/dad, grandma, neighbor, son’s friend, and so on. Everyone thought mom was the Good Housekeeping kind of mom. Everyone thought the son a regular well adjusted kid. No one would believe it. Then someone stumbled into it. What are the different ways being found out by someone else could play out?
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Sonny's mom Marti and grandma Greta were both wild girls, giving birth at 15. He's now a studly 18 so they're 33 and 48 and (table) tennis toned. Greta hauls Sonny into a drunken reminisce of his grampa Gus whom he so resembles. Then she seduces him. He's pounding away, she's screaming, and Marti walks in on them. "Oh girl, he's so GOOD!" Greta cries. Overwhelmed by lust, Marti strips and spreads. The usual ensues.

That should score around 4.7.
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Old 06-29-2018, 05:30 PM   #41
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sons getting hard over their mom

I really wonder, or should I say VERY!! curious if there is a lot of sons out there that beat off thinking of their mothers. We are an older couple , grand parents. And I have had so many fantasies the last few years about my some of my sons friends cuckolding me. Being much older now It gets me so excited thinking of a rock hard younger cock fucking my wife. So now I have started to have some thoughts of our son seeing his mom naked, maybe finding her naked pictures we've taking over the last like 20 years. Most are his mother in her mid 40's to early 50's. I can beat off A LOT just looking at my wife's naked pic's and think of our sons friends fucking her , or now leaving a few naked pic's around and my son coming over and finding them.

Anyway just so curious if a lot of guys get off thinking of seeing their mom naked , or being fucked like an old slut mom. Also if they get into their moms dirty smelly panties to sniff them. I'm a huge perverted panty sniffing husband.
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Old 06-30-2018, 07:15 AM   #42
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I love when mother and son are fucking behind dad’s back.
Mom visits her son away at college once a month. Dad thinks that is on the helicopter parent side. Mother and son think it’s on the incestuous orgasmic side.
Mother and son go away on vacation while dad is stuck at his corporate drone job.
Mother and son love to play touchy feely grab ass grab boobs grab cock when dad is only in the next room.
Completely agree, I love when mom and son hook up when dad is nearby. Family vacation is really hot, son fucks mom in the kitchen while dad is in the living room, mom slips out of bed while dad sleep to go to sons room...
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Completely agree, I love when mom and son hook up when dad is nearby. Family vacation is really hot, son fucks mom in the kitchen while dad is in the living room, mom slips out of bed while dad sleep to go to sons room...
Of course it started when mom sat in son's lap in the cramped car's back seat.
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Of course it started when mom sat in son's lap in the cramped car's back seat.
I love those stories so much I even wrote one of my own!

Love when mom and son fuck right under dads nose whether it’s in the othe room, they’re on the phone while son is thrusting his cock into mom, dad gets sloppy seconds and just thinks that she’s really wet while he licks his sons cum from moms pussy.
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I love those stories so much I even wrote one of my own!

Love when mom and son fuck right under dads nose whether it’s in the othe room, they’re on the phone while son is thrusting his cock into mom, dad gets sloppy seconds and just thinks that she’s really wet while he licks his sons cum from moms pussy.
Is the incest crowd nicer to cheaters than loving wives?
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Is the incest crowd nicer to cheaters than loving wives?
Absolutely, yes.

It's a different crowd, I think, with different expectations. The incest crowd loves stories about mom getting it on with the son who in one way or another is more of a "man" than the husband. Although, I will say, I think the stories usually work best when dad is seen as undeserving and son is stepping in to fulfill mom's unmet need, as opposed to dad actively seeking to be cuckolded by his son. I'm sure those stories exist too, but they're less common and I'm not as familiar with how they are received. Usually, dad doesn't know about mom and son, and that's part of what drives the suspense and drama of the story, especially when it's happening under his nose.
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Is the incest crowd nicer to cheaters than loving wives?
I'd say there's a double standard in that if there's a father/daughter relationship, the daughter is not allowed to screw around without her father's permission, even if the father has no sexual scruples himself. Might be the same with sister in a bro/sis relationship too, haven't written that into a story (or mom in mom/son), but I got a few angry emails when I did the first scenario.
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Absolutely, yes.

It's a different crowd, I think, with different expectations. The incest crowd loves stories about mom getting it on with the son who in one way or another is more of a "man" than the husband. Although, I will say, I think the stories usually work best when dad is seen as undeserving and son is stepping in to fulfill mom's unmet need, as opposed to dad actively seeking to be cuckolded by his son. I'm sure those stories exist too, but they're less common and I'm not as familiar with how they are received. Usually, dad doesn't know about mom and son, and that's part of what drives the suspense and drama of the story, especially when it's happening under his nose.
In my mother-son episodes, dad has usually been absent for some time and the incest almost seems inevitable. In some, dad is just useless, effectively absent, making minimal appearance. And I often have a sister (his or hers) involved in mother-son, maybe as catalyst. But in another, mom abandoned kids long ago and moved on. Years later, son looks old while mom kept her youthful beauty. Inadvertently connected, they just feel so *right* together!

I've done some father-daughter but again usually with an absent mother. But in one unexplained minor take, a wimpish father is the target of wife and daughter taking turns pegging and blowing him. Fun.

In either parent-child incest model, I'm more comfortable with the woman initiating. Less creepy. And IMHO 'why?' matters more in a romance than a stroker. Incest happens because whatever. Jigger a trigger, then follow the fun and consequences.

Mom and son screwing under the nose of an on-site dad -- I haven't done that yet. Other than an 'accidental' first fuck (back seat, costume, water slide), what's a believable trigger? Maybe hypersexual mom has separate sex lives with son and dad -- and other kin? But I don't believe mom and son screwing whilst dad happily watches. Not without brain damage somewhere.

Plot bunnies are piling up in my mental rabbit hutch. When will they escape?
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Okay. I’ve been toying around with this concept for a while now. Here’s the framework:

Working title: The Mommapocalypse (kind of like the Dr. Who “Empty Child” story but in reverse)

Protagonist is the 18 year old son of a woman (single) who is the incarnation of the MIlF archetype: tall, outrageously curvaceous redhead with boundless energy and enthusiasm who dotes on her son like crazy, verging on domineering smothering. But son is a bit of a pushover, so he enjoys the attention. She is, of course, desperately but unsuccessfully trying to suppress her libidinous thoughts.

When protagonist turns 18, he is given a Monkey’s Paw like McGuffin as a birthday present. Supposed to grant 1 wish but he doesn't believe it.

That day, he is talking with his best buddy. Best buddy is a girl and his decoy love interest, but her real purpose is to have someone for him to interact with when shit hits the fan.

Anyway, they are talking about his mom. She’s talking about her sexuality, he’s talking about her personality but they are basically talking past each other. She lets slip, “I wish I was like your mom.”

He replies, “I wish everyone was more like my mom.”

Wish granted, and everyone, and I mean everyone, in the entire fucking world starts turning into a doppelgänger, mind and body, of his mom.

Ideas:

Small sparks of their original personalities still remain, but mom is the dominant personality by far. So for example, Putin would into the protagonist’s mom doing a lousy Putin impersonation. Who wants her adorable, helpless, gorgeous hunk of barely legal manmeat of a son all to herself — as do a few billion other moms.

Things start slow. He makes the wish and then he and his friend go to school. Real mom drops in to make an embarrassing birthday greeting. A short while later, mom interrupts his school day again for an embarrassing birthday greeting, only she doesn’t remember the first visit, acting a little strange, and dressed very differently than she normally does. (I imagine this mom as a maneating CEO of some big local corp)

A while later, the PA system crackles to life once more: “[Protagonist], please meet your mother in the front office. Again.”

I’m thinking rude and crude mom this time.

Another scene of slow unraveling reality. Protagonist apologies to a teacher for all the disruptions. Teacher says not to worry about it, adding, “After all, I am your mother.”

EDIT: What do you think? Got any ideas for complications, sex scenes, or resolution? I”ve got a bunch more if anyone’s interested in helping me flesh this out.
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