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Old 07-01-2018, 08:13 AM   #51
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In my mother-son episodes, dad has usually been absent for some time and the incest almost seems inevitable. In some, dad is just useless, effectively absent, making minimal appearance. And I often have a sister (his or hers) involved in mother-son, maybe as catalyst. But in another, mom abandoned kids long ago and moved on. Years later, son looks old while mom kept her youthful beauty. Inadvertently connected, they just feel so *right* together!

I've done some father-daughter but again usually with an absent mother. But in one unexplained minor take, a wimpish father is the target of wife and daughter taking turns pegging and blowing him. Fun.

In either parent-child incest model, I'm more comfortable with the woman initiating. Less creepy. And IMHO 'why?' matters more in a romance than a stroker. Incest happens because whatever. Jigger a trigger, then follow the fun and consequences.

Mom and son screwing under the nose of an on-site dad -- I haven't done that yet. Other than an 'accidental' first fuck (back seat, costume, water slide), what's a believable trigger? Maybe hypersexual mom has separate sex lives with son and dad -- and other kin? But I don't believe mom and son screwing whilst dad happily watches. Not without brain damage somewhere.

Plot bunnies are piling up in my mental rabbit hutch. When will they escape?
Iím not sure Iíve come across the water slide before... can you link to one??
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Old 07-01-2018, 02:07 PM   #52
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That way lies madness.
Isnít that the point?

I think situation erotica (where the context of the fucking is the key of the eroticism) can tickle the brain more than lurid descriptions of coitus.

But my imagination tends toward the gonzo and bizarro genre. And if any flavor of fiction can benefit from gonzo, itís smut.

I mean, itís pure fantasy already. So go big.
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Iím not sure Iíve come across the water slide before... can you link to one??
Have some.
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Old 07-02-2018, 12:25 AM   #54
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That looks much more like a bunch of water slide sex attempts.

Which reminds me, once in college I complained about the title of the movie, The Great Escape, as setting up false expectations. My friend replies, ďWhat, you would have wanted to call it The Great Escape Attempt? No one would pay to see it!Ē

And if we had had that conversation over a decade later than we did, I would have replied, ďSnakes on a Plane. Checkmate, atheists.Ē
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I am pleased that the demand for more Momcest is exerting itís pressure on the video scene. Iíve been a fan of Rachel Steeleís work for a while now. Recently, Iíve seen Momcest specialists Andi James and Brianna Breach turn out good product. I like these actresses because they carry themselves like realistic mature moms. Andi and Brianna also have a little thicker bodies, more like moms in their 40s and 50s. Yea, I know there is Cory Chase. Iím a little less enamored by her as she appears a tad youngish.
Hopefully more available product will inspire more Literotica writers to take up the topic. What I really would like to see is a series like the Mother Dauggter Exchange Club or Mommyís Girl, but with no stepmother or swap mother dodge. A quality video series of the performers presenting themselves as biological mothers and sons. I believe Filly Films has already crossed the biological mother/daughter frontier. Why video storytelling can pretend biological mother/daughter and not mother/son is strange. In any case, me thinks that barrier is on the verge of falling, which will be to the delight of oedipalists everywhere.
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Are there any mom/son water slide stories?
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Old 07-02-2018, 04:00 PM   #57
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EDIT: What do you think? Got any ideas for complications, sex scenes, or resolution? IĒve got a bunch more if anyoneís interested in helping me flesh this out.
Read your comment about wanting feedback on this idea so here I am.
Is he also turning into his mother? And are you going Twilight Zone, they eventually become her duplicates, or are they more like versions of her? Do they develop a hive mind?
Ideas- Of course, has three four or fivesomes with mom included (or directing). Teachers give him spankings in front of the class, who then come up one by one to kiss him better. A club/sex ranch opens with women who look most like his mom and she's running it and he gets them all pregnant with girls who will also look like his mother.
Eventually he wakes up, or his mother's able to undo it (with a twist of course), or, fuck it, why not let them live the dream?
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Old 07-02-2018, 04:37 PM   #58
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I believe Filly Films has already crossed the biological mother/daughter frontier. Why video storytelling can pretend biological mother/daughter and not mother/son is strange.
Disclaimer: all the following statements are speculation unsupported by any actual, presentable knowledge.

Porn industry caters primarily to a supposed average frustrated traditional straight male. Sure, there all kinds of kinks supported, but that is the assumed main client, the big bucks.

Assumed average frustrated traditional straight male isn't a rational being, or rather, his rationality interest no one in this context. Instincts does. So following is not what he says, but how he reacts.

Assumed average frustrated traditional straight male doesn't see lesbian sex as real sex even. That's just a show at best, at worst, substitute play until a "real" man (he) will come along. Anyway, sex is only penis-in-vagina, and only real, live penis.

Mommy - daughter incest isn't really an incest. That even have biological sense, no babies can be born, no risk of birth defects. Sure, there is the other component of incest, social: a person of authority abusing their dependant. However, if sex is shown as strictly, fully and honestly consensual, that can be ignored. There is no "real" sex, no abuse, therefore no incest. It's just kinky play.
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Old 07-02-2018, 05:43 PM   #59
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Read your comment about wanting feedback on this idea so here I am.
Is he also turning into his mother? And are you going Twilight Zone, they eventually become her duplicates, or are they more like versions of her? Do they develop a hive mind?
Ideas- Of course, has three four or fivesomes with mom included (or directing). Teachers give him spankings in front of the class, who then come up one by one to kiss him better. A club/sex ranch opens with women who look most like his mom and she's running it and he gets them all pregnant with girls who will also look like his mother.
Eventually he wakes up, or his mother's able to undo it (with a twist of course), or, fuck it, why not let them live the dream?
Thank you for feedback!

I was thinking that he wouldnít be turning, or be the last to turn if the story did need a little T/G

The present version of the idea is each momling is unique (although having a dozen of the momlings hive-up ... maybe they all belonged to a wacky cult before they momified ... might make a great subplot/hurdle to overcome).

So anyway, present incarnation of the idea is that each momling is unique, with a personality of his original mom + a spark from the original person who has been momified. One thing weird Iím thinking of doing is having only the son and the sonís erstwhile love interest actually realizing anything weird is going on. Everyone else just adjusts to the new reality. (The erstwhile love interest is the person who gave the son the monkeyís paw-like object, which Iím thinking is a crystal containing the final unfulfilled wish or a heartbroken sex genie or something).

The current outline has son and mom prime having a falling out after things get really zany, and she leaves him and strikes out on her own in momworld (leaving him to drown in horny/crazy momlings). He figures out the magic Plot Device needed to get the world back to normal, but the Plot Device requires he be reunited with his true mother.

So he has to finder her among the sea of her doppelgšngers.

The After School Special message of the story is for the son to see his mother as an individual rather than just some fount of maternal love.
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Old 07-02-2018, 10:11 PM   #60
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So he has to finder her among the sea of her doppelgšngers.

The After School Special message of the story is for the son to see his mother as an individual rather than just some fount of maternal love.
Like Chihiro in Spirited Away, when she has to pick which pigs are her parents!
So it could just be their personal connection, or he could have some personal item of hers that works like a beacon (like the one Howl gives Sophie in Howl's Moving Castle to make another Miyazaki reference), or perhaps he knows her favorite place or dream destination and she's there by herself waiting, or he spots her by a mannerism/tell that only she has.
Or vagina magic.
Presumably they'd have to ritualistically destroy the monkey paw together, or he has the paw but she has to make the wish.
Interesting concept. Go big or go home, right?
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Old 07-03-2018, 07:42 PM   #61
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Mommy - daughter incest isn't really an incest. That even have biological sense, no babies can be born, no risk of birth defects.
In a couple series I include three sisters (based on reality) who are "Irish twins" born only 10 months apart, whom daddy abandoned. Sleeping together in a big bed because not rich, they're raised by a practical, liberal mom who encourages them to explore each other, keeping the boys away, and who later joins in with them.

In another series, mom and daughter and son have been casually naked at home since dad ran off when the kids were pre-pubescent. I tell of but don't describe Mom seducing daughter and then son when they reach 18. It's just natural. Their "family circle" is a triad daisychain, Mom slurping daughter slurping son slurping the portal from which he emerged into the world.

For some, it's only incest if pregnancy can occur. My definition is broader. Do we have any mother-daughter incest where dad is still around?
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Old 07-09-2018, 10:23 AM   #62
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A brother and sister compete

A brother and sister have an incestuous relationship. The brother is 18 and just graduated high school. His sister is 20 and, while she still loves her brotherís cock, she has gotten a taste of sapphic delight at college. She looks a lot like actress Erica Durance, btw. After a torrid sex session, they wonder if they could bed their straight laced conservative mother. Mom is leader of the community decency committee. The kids decide that maybe they can convince mom if more kide could have sex with their mothers, it would reduce public immorality. Itís a dubious argument. But a son and daughter do what one can to get into momís pants. They decide to turn it into a competition. Who can seduce mom first?
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Old 07-13-2018, 12:43 PM   #63
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@OedipalLustGuru I'm going to give your idea a try
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Old 07-17-2018, 05:09 PM   #64
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Mom and dad are very scared about cancer. They go in for all of their checks, get some genetic testing done and find that testicular cancer is a risk for dad and son. Looking up info, they find a study that suggests completely emptying your balls at least twice a month can assist with staving off cancer.

Dad is eager to give it a try and mom and him start having sex more. But what about son? He just turned 18. He gets told about what mom and dad discovered and agrees to masturbate more...after all, it's not like he has much luck with talking to women, let alone dating or having sex.

Mom, feeling bad about that and wanting to make sure he drains himself completely, mom shows up in his room in a lowcut dress and some silk gloves, promising him a real hand job to feel better about it. She gets quite a few loads but there's more, so time for a blowjob! There's More though so mom has to do whatever it takes to get it out of him. Mom cuddles with him and reminds him he needs to be fully drained at least twice a month so he can come for her any time.
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There aren't enough on Lit already?
Yeah, granted I love incest tales, but the same formulaic Momcest plot seems to be mass-produced of late. They should give it a rest.
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When mother and son have sex, make sure we know itís a mother and son!

For myself, the actual sex scene in a Momcest story is what is decisive. The quality of the story stands or falls on how well the sex is described as taking place between a mother and son. Or is it described in a generic manner in which it could take place between any heterosexual couple? The best set up is to no avail if the familial relationship is not evident in the sex. If a sonís cock is sliding in and out of his motherís cunt, why is that the be all and end all? One recent author who handles this issue well is steinwolf8, in my humble opinion.
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How bout this:

Mom has been feeling lonely since dad left. Mom has been masturbating in private but gets caught by adult son. They have a talk and son bluntly admits: he wants to fuck her. He loves her like a son but he wants to fuck her and a good deal of that is because it's wrong and the thought of his mom gobbling his cock excites him...and based on what she's been reading and watching online, he thinks it excites her too.

Mom is stunned but thinks it over and calls him after school and asks him to buy some condoms. Mom admits the idea is appealing to her kinks but she figures even one time could ruin things between them...but since they both want it, they'll do it, find it's not as great as they thought it would be and realize it was never worth getting fixated on.

Then they start and all that gets thrown out the window. At first mom is overcome by how the taboo takes it to 11 while son finds his mom might not have been getting action but is by no means out of practice. As they come, they start to embrace the wrongness, getting rougher, swearing, teasing and getting more and more intent on seeing who stops things first.

For example: at first mom is very reassuring and son is gentle but teasing. By the end of the night, they're saying things like:

"If you come before me, you're licking my ass till your tongue goes numb, you little shit." While they fuck wildly.

They end the night exhausted, wrapped in each other's arms, laughing about how wild things got. They agree to make it a regular thing and kiss, only to them see their shocked sister/daughter who watched tthe whole thing.
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I dont believe father/daughter relations will ever become socially acceptable, simply because the power dynamic is too one-sided.

But mother/son sexuality will, in time, enter the mainstream consciousness...as it already has in Japan. If you look up the great JAV studios like Madonna, Takara, Center Village and Venus you will find literally hundreds of videos involving actors who look like ordinary folks you might see at the grocery store or library!

These are classy ladies who recognize that teenage boys with heavy balls need to be milked. A common scenario is one where her son is having trouble studying for an exam and needs relief from certain 'distractions'...and matters escalate rather quickly from there. After pleasuring her son with her soft elegant hands or her mouth, they begin to explore new vistas....the poor boy eventually ejaculating all over his mother's body, so she can massage the life-giving nectar into her aroused flesh.

If there is a father figure involved he is usually clueless...except to often notice the disheveled state of the family home, on returning from the office.

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Like Chihiro in Spirited Away, when she has to pick which pigs are her parents!
Yep! With more sex.

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So it could just be their personal connection, or he could have some personal item of hers that works like a beacon (like the one Howl gives Sophie in Howl's Moving Castle to make another Miyazaki reference), or perhaps he knows her favorite place or dream destination and she's there by herself waiting, or he spots her by a mannerism/tell that only she has.
The tell I was originally thinking of: at beginning of story, the son and his erstwhile love interest are waiting for their ride to school. Hot mom comes flouncing out of house to give son something he forgot. Notices erstwhile love interests new look and all her piercings, and ones-up love interest by flashing her belly to son and interest ó momís bellybutton has a fat (faux) sapphire pierced into it.

(Would also serve to introduce sexual tension between the three)

So the idea was to find his real mom, he needs to look at lots and lots of bare momling bellies.

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And thatís the best magic.

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Presumably they'd have to ritualistically destroy the monkey paw together, or he has the paw but she has to make the wish.
Oh yeah, he definitely needs her buy-in.

The original idea had a homage to all those ďsex genieĒ fulfillment stories on Lit. The ďpawĒ was to be a crystal supposedly holding ďthe last unfulfilled wish of a broken-hearted sex genie.Ē

Iím not entire sure what that means, exactly, but Iíd use it as the Plot Device to drive all the crazy sex. I had thought of making the sex genie an antagonist, although in stories like this antagonism is just a strategy to introduce even wilder sexual situations.

Oh! Just thought of something. (Literally while typing this response.) When son makes his wish, his crystal cracks and darkens. Sex genie free but in deep background of story to be revealed gradually. Resolution is to get the sex genie into real momís bellybutton sapphire (I guess it turns out to be a real and flawless sapphire to everyoneís surprise, one of the few things in the world that can recapture the genie).

Well, if we go with the sex genie Plot Device. New thought: But then we need to redeem the sex genie too so rather than her getting locked into momís bellybutton son gets both mom and sex genie at the Happy Ending.

Third new thought: So maybe rather than getting trapped in the belly gem, mom discovers she is pregnant and gives birth to a rebooted baby sex genie, who grows into her powers when she turns 18 (this being the Law of Lit).

So the story ends with mom-son and sister-brother incest. And the sister has phenomenal cosmic power that she can only wield if the result is sexy.

In other words: VAGINA MAGIC (full circle!) (Itís weird where ideas come from. Mine seem to all be cornball though. Also I should not make stream-of-consciousness posts like this so late at night.)

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Interesting concept. Go big or go home, right?
Damn straight. All porn is fantasy, and if Iím going to fantasize, I ainít doing it halfway.

I want to use the term ďgonzoĒ but ďgonzo pornĒ already exists.
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