LateNightStories
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https://www.literotica.com/s/castles-made-of-sand-ch-02
Hi, all! I've just posted the second chapter to my story Castles Made of Sand. It's a fantasy story. The chapter has quite a dark and gritty tone. There is a bit of reluctance/bdsm.
Please, give whatever feedback you like, but I would be particularly interested in feedback on characterisation.
Wordcount is 10239.
Hi, all! I've just posted the second chapter to my story Castles Made of Sand. It's a fantasy story. The chapter has quite a dark and gritty tone. There is a bit of reluctance/bdsm.
Please, give whatever feedback you like, but I would be particularly interested in feedback on characterisation.
Wordcount is 10239.