jonyoungau
Literotica Guru
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I wrote this for the story challenge on the ASN Story Board and was wondering what people thought of it from Literotica. if it was good or not and what changes would make it better from what I have here.
"Story Challenge - Hayleys Discovery
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"Story Challenge - Hayleys Discovery
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