First time writer seeking editor

I'm looking for some help submitting my first (and possibly more) story. A little background...

I'm not a writer and never really thought of myself as one. My man likes for me to recount our experiences in detail as little homework assignments and we thought it would be fun to post them. I like to write in a stream of consciousness when I write for him, but I understand that this will need to be corrected for publication. I just find that the separation of paragraphs pull me from the story. When submitting to the editor, this will already be attempted at the very least. Any other help would also be appreciated.

My stories usually involve a little spanking and a little kink. Sometimes toys. Always between a man and woman.

Thank you so much for your consideration.

If you need an editor still, you can PM me or submit through the volunteer editor form.