Lookin' for a baiter tester for my new story...

Would someone like to read it and look for bad writin' and stuff cause I write like I talk and and sometimes I talk faster than I can type so I mess up sometimes. You can send me a private massage if you want and I'll mail you the story on the computer instead of the regular mail cause that could take a week to get it to you.

Thanks

Debbie

What is the category and word count?

LadyVer said:

What is the category and word count?

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It's almost 9300 words and I'll be posting it in Humor. It's written first person and in the style of the original post. There is actually a lot of errors that are intentional, so you're gonna see a lot of read. It's all part of the character. Mainly what I'm looking for is broken sentences where I might have left a word out or other problems with the story line.

Debbie tends to use words for punctuation and while I have punctuated there are a lot of long, strung out sentences. Again, part of the character.

I recommend if you take the challenge you keep a bottle of Advil handy.

Or rum.

Your choice.

Thanks,

My_I (Debbie's alter-ego)

Ok. I guess not. Thanks anyway.

Debbie

What's the premise of your humor story?