J JWTove Virgin Joined Aug 1, 2011 Posts 3 Jul 5, 2014 #1 Story has not been submitted. Need routine look over, and critical comments from a women's perspective. Thanks in advance... Last edited: Jul 7, 2014
Story has not been submitted. Need routine look over, and critical comments from a women's perspective. Thanks in advance...
C cessyful Really Experienced Joined Jul 23, 2014 Posts 142 Jul 31, 2014 #2 hi there Sure, just message me and I'll look into it.
