Old 08-15-2018, 01:50 AM   #676
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Three gasped breaths... hold... release

Fervent desire
Uttered in lust
Expressed honestly
Love me deeply

Lustful fire
Rhythmic thrust
Kissed passionately
Love me gently

Lifted higher
Heart beat rushed
Devoured willingly
Love me wildly

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Old 08-15-2018, 11:55 PM   #677
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A wisp of cigarette smoke hangs in the air
like a ghost spiralling into the darkness
as I walk silently through the empty streets.
I've never felt lonely or afraid here.
This is my city, asleep now, readying herself
for the clamour of the early morning.
The moon sheds his light as if waiting to illuminate
some great photography of a special place and time.
But alas, I must turn my steps for home,
to my loved one who lies not yet asleep,
waiting.
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They say a smile is a gift which is free to the giver and precious to the recipient.
But giving the finger is free, too, and I find it more personal and sincere.
If at first you don't succeed....skydiving is not for you ....
If you don't pay your exorcist .... do you get repossessed?
I shall always decide not to decide, unless of course I decide to change my mind.
....But I, being poor, have only my dreams, I have spread my dreams under your feet,Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.......
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Old 08-22-2018, 02:06 AM   #678
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Turning tides

I stood at the edge and watched it turn.
Water flowed up around my feet where land and sea meet.
I stood stock still and watched the tide turn.
I watch it still.
I saw his struggling but the tide did turn.
He was triumphant I did learn.
They were held down but the tide did turn
Now they stand tall, those that held them fall.
Water up to my knees
And justice was not done but the tide did turn
THe sea did rise ebb and flow and I did learn.
Water about my waist and what waste it could be
To be taken by the hungry sea
Water rising closer and closer to his face
Turned aside in disgrace but the wax and wane came again.
Water at my neck straining to hold panic in check
But the tide will turn

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Old 08-22-2018, 09:59 AM   #679
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Turning tides

I stood at the edge and watched it turn.
Water flowed up around my feet where land and sea meet.
I stood stock still and watched the tide turn.
I watch it still.
I saw his struggling but the tide did turn.
He was triumphant I did learn.
They were held down but the tide did turn
Now they stand tall, those that held them fall.
Water up to my knees
And justice was not done but the tide did turn
THe sea did rise ebb and flow and I did learn.
Water about my waist and what waste it could be
To be taken by the hungry sea
Water rising closer and closer to his face
Turned aside in disgrace but the wax and wane came again.
Water at my neck straining to hold panic in check
But the tide will turn

Uggg
Wow. just wow!!
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They say a smile is a gift which is free to the giver and precious to the recipient.
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If at first you don't succeed....skydiving is not for you ....
If you don't pay your exorcist .... do you get repossessed?
I shall always decide not to decide, unless of course I decide to change my mind.
....But I, being poor, have only my dreams, I have spread my dreams under your feet,Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.......
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Old 08-22-2018, 11:43 PM   #680
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Wow. just wow!!
*smiles shyly*

Glad you liked it... wasn't too sure about this one.

Lots of nice internal rhyme but I didn't really follow any structure so I wasn't to sure about the rhythm.

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Old 08-23-2018, 01:04 AM   #681
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*smiles shyly*

Glad you liked it... wasn't to sure about this one.

Lots of nice internal rhyme but I didn't really follow any structure so I wasn't to sure about the rhythm.

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It's a bit confusing as in places it is written as you, then as if it's someone else.
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They say a smile is a gift which is free to the giver and precious to the recipient.
But giving the finger is free, too, and I find it more personal and sincere.
If at first you don't succeed....skydiving is not for you ....
If you don't pay your exorcist .... do you get repossessed?
I shall always decide not to decide, unless of course I decide to change my mind.
....But I, being poor, have only my dreams, I have spread my dreams under your feet,Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.......
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Old 08-23-2018, 01:12 AM   #682
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If you haven't seen the post be aware ........... A warning, before you answer specific threads and give away your personal details, be aware we often have trolls in our midst who are here just to do that ...... get personal details from unsuspecting poets.
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They say a smile is a gift which is free to the giver and precious to the recipient.
But giving the finger is free, too, and I find it more personal and sincere.
If at first you don't succeed....skydiving is not for you ....
If you don't pay your exorcist .... do you get repossessed?
I shall always decide not to decide, unless of course I decide to change my mind.
....But I, being poor, have only my dreams, I have spread my dreams under your feet,Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.......
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Old 08-23-2018, 01:22 AM   #683
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If you haven't seen the post be aware ........... A warning, before you answer specific threads and give away your personal details, be aware we often have trolls in our midst who are here just to do that ...... get personal details from unsuspecting poets.
What's this about Annie? Did you mean to post this in Group Uggg or was it meant for another thread?

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Old 08-23-2018, 01:23 AM   #684
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It's a bit confusing as in places it is written as you, then as if it's someone else.

Might revise this a bit... I had wondered about that too. cant think on it right now though.. Will revisit it later.. maybe tonight
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Old 08-23-2018, 03:06 AM   #685
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Slight revision:

Turning tides

I stood at the edge and watched it turn.
Water flowed up around my feet where land and sea meet.
I stood stock still and watched the tide turn.
I watch it still.
I saw them struggling but the tide did turn.
They were triumphant I did learn.
They were held down but the tide did turn
Now they stand tall, those that held them fall.
Water up to my knees
And justice was not done but the tide did turn
The sea did rise ebb and flow and I did learn.
Water about my waist and what waste it could be
To be taken by the hungry sea
Water rising closer and closer to the face
Turned aside in disgrace but the wax and wane came again.
Water at my neck straining to hold panic in check
But the tide will turn!

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Old 08-23-2018, 09:03 AM   #686
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What's this about Annie? Did you mean to post this in Group Uggg or was it meant for another thread?

Uggg
No I wanted to warn your friends who might not realize that we have a troll amongst us, he pops up chancing his arm every so often, trying to get personal details from unsuspecting members. You can always take it down if you'd rather they were kept in the dark.
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They say a smile is a gift which is free to the giver and precious to the recipient.
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If at first you don't succeed....skydiving is not for you ....
If you don't pay your exorcist .... do you get repossessed?
I shall always decide not to decide, unless of course I decide to change my mind.
....But I, being poor, have only my dreams, I have spread my dreams under your feet,Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.......
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Old 08-23-2018, 04:13 PM   #687
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No I wanted to warn your friends who might not realize that we have a troll amongst us, he pops up chancing his arm every so often, trying to get personal details from unsuspecting members. You can always take it down if you'd rather they were kept in the dark.

Oh no... don't take it down.

Just wasn't sure what you were referring to in the first post.

Who's the troll we should be watchin out for?

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Old 08-23-2018, 04:20 PM   #688
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It's a bit confusing as in places it is written as you, then as if it's someone else.

Did you think the revision worked better Annie?
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Old 08-29-2018, 01:15 AM   #689
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I've just posted a poem on Facebook and been told in all seriousness that I need to see a Doctor because it's scary! Ooops
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They say a smile is a gift which is free to the giver and precious to the recipient.
But giving the finger is free, too, and I find it more personal and sincere.
If at first you don't succeed....skydiving is not for you ....
If you don't pay your exorcist .... do you get repossessed?
I shall always decide not to decide, unless of course I decide to change my mind.
....But I, being poor, have only my dreams, I have spread my dreams under your feet,Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.......
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Old 08-29-2018, 02:58 AM   #690
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I've just posted a poem on Facebook and been told in all seriousness that I need to see a Doctor because it's scary! Ooops
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Old 09-01-2018, 10:58 AM   #691
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Just popping in to say hi and spread some sparkles.

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I find myself lost in him and it's the kind of lost that's exactly like being found.
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Old 09-01-2018, 10:02 PM   #692
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Just popping in to say hi and spread some sparkles.

Hiya Tink,

Been a bit quiet in here this last week or so, I was on slow- end of month- internet till today.

I owe a few co-writers posts in SRPs but after that iImight post a poem or two if my brains co-operate.

Your sparkle is always welcome

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Old 09-04-2018, 05:21 AM   #693
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I CLOSE MY EYES

I close my eyes and dream
Whisked away from reality
Adventures excitedly begin
The scenery is breathtaking
I am suddenly the damsel or
burdened maiden in waiting
Awaiting the arrival of Cupid
Feeling the pinch of an arrow
Sensing he has a lovely soul
Yet I have yet to see his face
He walks towards me reaching
I'm currently blushing delighted,
Looking down, excitement builds
Hands slide around waist, back
My eyes open in the moment
Losing the pictured daydream....
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Old 09-04-2018, 09:00 PM   #694
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I CLOSE MY EYES

I close my eyes and dream
Whisked away from reality
Adventures excitedly begin
The scenery is breathtaking
I am suddenly the damsel or
burdened maiden in waiting
Awaiting the arrival of Cupid
Feeling the pinch of an arrow
Sensing he has a lovely soul
Yet I have yet to see his face
He walks towards me reaching
I'm currently blushing delighted,
Looking down, excitement builds
Hands slide around waist, back
My eyes open in the moment
Losing the pictured daydream....
Yummy daydreams
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Old 09-04-2018, 09:24 PM   #695
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UGGG HOW ARE YA BABE!!??!! MISSED YOU💋💋💋
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Old 09-04-2018, 10:16 PM   #696
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UGGG HOW ARE YA BABE!!??!! MISSED YOU💋💋💋

WOOOOOOOH- All caps?!? you make me feel special lol.

Yea sorry bout my absences lately, had a few days of virtually no internet near the end of last month and just haven't really been feeling like spending my time online of late. My energy/ creativity/ enthusiam is comng in fits and starts.

One day I start to feel normal the next I just feel blah. Had a few drinks over the weekend though (with the doctors permission) so that was nice. been missing that.

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Old 09-05-2018, 01:14 AM   #697
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WOOOOOOOH- All caps?!? you make me feel special lol.

Yea sorry bout my absences lately, had a few days of virtually no internet near the end of last month and just haven't really been feeling like spending my time online of late. My energy/ creativity/ enthusiam is comng in fits and starts.

One day I start to feel normal the next I just feel blah. Had a few drinks over the weekend though (with the doctors permission) so that was nice. been missing that.

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Old 09-11-2018, 04:43 AM   #698
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Stopping in to say hi....

I feel like lately I am full of words and thoughts and soon I would like to share them.

Hoping you are doing well
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Old 09-12-2018, 03:47 AM   #699
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Stopping in to say hi....

I feel like lately I am full of words and thoughts and soon I would like to share them.

Hoping you are doing well
Hey stranger,

How are you? Hope all is well in your part of the big deep blue.
Things have been a bit up and down here but they seem to be more up than down right now.

Yes, please share words and thoughts.

That's my favorite flavor

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Hey stranger,

How are you? Hope all is well in your part of the big deep blue.
Things have been a bit up and down here but they seem to be more up than down right now.

Yes, please share words and thoughts.

That's my favorite flavor

Uggg
Things are going well...I have docked my ship here once again...to step into a place of imagination and dreams...literotica of course...

I want to have a little fun again on here...posting my thoughts...

Have you been affected by any storms? We have out in the Pacific...

I pray for all those affected by all the storms around the world.
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