The flabby bit

dididothat

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Hi Guys,

I've been writing my story Sort of legal and so far published eight chapters, but I've hit a bit of a middle flabby bit. Would any kind soul like to read the story, and give me some suggestions? A military background would probably be a bonus, but a love of sci fi is a must (there's a good bit of sex in the story)

Not really looking for editors, just a refocus ideas kick around.


Stacey x
 
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