Teen Teacher

SuperWill19

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I had an idea for a story. A teen becomes a teacher at 16 years at a high school. Her twin sister (not identical) sister attends. Doesn't matter what subject she teaches. I was thinking maybe art. When she turns 18 she falls in love with a student. They get caught with her giving him a blowjob or getting ready to go all the way. In the principal's office the principal has the teacher alone and says that he'll let things slide if she has sex with him. Reluctantly she agrees and when he's half way into either her pussy or ass her sister breaks in and catches them. She says that she and her mom had an agreement that they would have sex with him if the sister was allowed to teach there. So the older sister threatens to cut him off of the sex unless he was willing to have sex with her then and there instead of the younger sister. later the girl goes to her divorced father and has sex with him. She eventually gets pregnant but doesn't know if the father of the baby is her boyfriend or her father.
 
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promising start if you drop the 16 angle (or bury it in backstory)
 
So, this is a female Doogie Howser? Yeah, just raise the age to 18. Lit can be tough about that little minor sticking point. Otherwise, cute whiz kid angle, I suppose. Definitely not the usual tripe.
 
Yep, this has potential - just gotta bump those ages up. If I were you I'd move it out of high school, too; there's too high a risk of characters being assumed as under 18.
 
Actually Lit tends to be pretty cool about high school seniors are 18 despite teh fact that (at least when I was in) there was just shy of 50% chance of you turning 18 before graduating (because of cut off dates) and that assumes its towards the end of the year everybody is 17 when it starts.
 
I was 17 when I graduated high school.

I do like the idea of an 18-year-old teaching college students. Even more so if she was tiny. Maybe 5', 95 lb. with a pixie-like body type and very innocent/virginal look (kinda like Gigi Rivera). Maybe one of the college football players is in her class and is doing poorly. She offers to tutor him since he's the star player. He's huge...6'6", 280 lbs. She starts fantasizing about fucking that giant and eventually makes it a reality.
 
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I was 17 when I graduated high school.

I do like the idea of an 18-year-old teaching college students. Even more so if she was tiny. Maybe 5', 95 lb. with a pixie-like body type and very innocent/virginal look (kinda like Gigi Rivera). Maybe one of the college football players is in her class and is doing poorly. She offers to tutor him since he's the star player. He's huge...6'6", 240 lbs. She starts fantasizing about fucking that giant and eventually makes it a reality.

Of all my close friends (twenty or so that I would consider that for) 6 of us were 18 upon graduation. Here in California the cut off date is sometime in October or November (or was fifteen plus years ago) So anybody born after that was part of the next class. Still Lit's rule of thumb is High School seniors are 18 unless stated otherwise and high school students are eighteen unless stated otherwise. You have to kinda know how to play the rules and occasionally either ask the censors for guidance or change your language (it's okay to call a college student a girl, you should probably call a high school student a young woman.) Like wise your high school girls should be better endowed or at least watch your wording. Budding breasts is a no no, just a handful will probably sail through. They should be driving, not looking forward to getting their license. Basically avoid anything that sounds like your refering to either someone going through puberty (hense fully devoloped) or 16 (hence already driving)

I do like the idea of the story by the way.
 
I was 16....when I quit:rolleyes:

For some reason I find the idea they would allow an 18 year old to teach high school one of those "unreality" moments that personally I can't work around.

But the premise for the most part is solid, just like the others I'll add to ditch 16.
 
I was 18 when I graduated, too.

So was I. But a lot of my friends are born to back east parents and back east people breed during the winter. That's why my entire family (sans me) are born late July through early September. Hell I don't even try to figure out who's birthday it is in August. I just post HAPPY BIRTHDAY on my face book page for 45 days and let people think I was thinking of them. :D (When the truth is I just kinda feel left out. Kinda like 9/11 where I can't get emotional about it because I wasn't in the world when it happened. I watch everybody else and I'm like. . .I think I was getting shots. . .or running. . .or being yelled at by a DI. . .or possibly cleaning the floor. . .or martching. Dunno.)

My point however is that Lit tends to be cool about it. And as some of the authors of greater talent and more prominence than me can attest there is a "quality" filter. If you're a good enough writer you could probably get away with a baby being raped by dingos. Just most of us shouldn't try for anything quite so bold.

I was 16....when I quit:rolleyes:

For some reason I find the idea they would allow an 18 year old to teach high school one of those "unreality" moments that personally I can't work around.

But the premise for the most part is solid, just like the others I'll add to ditch 16.

I agree with an "exemption" clause. First I think you could make it fly in what I like to call "Porn Heavy." In porn heavy you just lay it on so fucking thick that the fact that it's unbelievable is the point. You know stories where the pizza boy cut a hole in the bottom of the pizza box shoved his cock through delivers the pizza to a sorority and the girls were in the middle of a lingerie pillow fight and of course can't find their wallets but are willing to let him make a deposit directly into their bellies. The others are either she's wicked smart and graduated early (I had a teacher like that, granted he was actually 22 or 23 I think but he didn't look that old. Like he had to carry his wallet to go to lunch to keep the proctors from fucking with him. Also maybe she's not really a teacher. My school had TAs that were students getting credits and coaches who were basically in the same camp.
 
Actually Lit tends to be pretty cool about high school seniors are 18 despite teh fact that (at least when I was in) there was just shy of 50% chance of you turning 18 before graduating (because of cut off dates) and that assumes its towards the end of the year everybody is 17 when it starts.

I was 19 (Started late and left back once) when I graduated HS and over 1600 of the 2000 graduating seniors in my HS class were over 18. Gotta love NYC public schools.
 
So was I. But a lot of my friends are born to back east parents and back east people breed during the winter. That's why my entire family (sans me) are born late July through early September. Hell I don't even try to figure out who's birthday it is in August. I just post HAPPY BIRTHDAY on my face book page for 45 days and let people think I was thinking of them. :D (When the truth is I just kinda feel left out. Kinda like 9/11 where I can't get emotional about it because I wasn't in the world when it happened. I watch everybody else and I'm like. . .I think I was getting shots. . .or running. . .or being yelled at by a DI. . .or possibly cleaning the floor. . .or martching. Dunno.)

My point however is that Lit tends to be cool about it. And as some of the authors of greater talent and more prominence than me can attest there is a "quality" filter. If you're a good enough writer you could probably get away with a baby being raped by dingos. Just most of us shouldn't try for anything quite so bold.



I agree with an "exemption" clause. First I think you could make it fly in what I like to call "Porn Heavy." In porn heavy you just lay it on so fucking thick that the fact that it's unbelievable is the point. You know stories where the pizza boy cut a hole in the bottom of the pizza box shoved his cock through delivers the pizza to a sorority and the girls were in the middle of a lingerie pillow fight and of course can't find their wallets but are willing to let him make a deposit directly into their bellies. The others are either she's wicked smart and graduated early (I had a teacher like that, granted he was actually 22 or 23 I think but he didn't look that old. Like he had to carry his wallet to go to lunch to keep the proctors from fucking with him. Also maybe she's not really a teacher. My school had TAs that were students getting credits and coaches who were basically in the same camp.

Porn heavy...yup ba chika wa wa......Anything works in that.

You know...I can't do it. I sat there one night and said "self...you're going to sit here and you are going to write a scene. Son is in the shower, mom is going to hop in with him, suck on him and he is going to fuck her against the wall, why? Who the fuck cares?

I couldn't do it. I just kept saying why would she do it? What would motivate her? Did dad die and she is too nervous with other men? Did dad cheat and she is just out of her mind for some sick revenge? Does she need to get pregnant?

There is seriously something wrong with me. MY latest mother/son is a damn novel at 41k:rolleyes:
 
In my Agatha Allbutt series, the characters in the first chapter were under 18, but I made it clear nothing sexual happened, except one really erotic kiss. It passed muster. Chapter one was strictly backstory to introduce the characters and their feelings toward each other, and to have the Female and Male lead have a way to get together later.

I would make her a student teacher, genius. Like someone mentioned Doogie Howser type character. She gets to know the students and struggles with being their age, and yet in a position of authority over them. I would maybe add in an attraction to some guy. Then at 18 she graduates and is hired by the school to be a teacher.

Then your main plot can work.

You can mention underage sex, I know many stories have statements like she lost her cherry at 15, but hasn't had sex since... This is allowed. Hell one story talks about the mom being molested as a kid, then when she has a kid, she pimps out her kid, but this is narrated and no details are provided so it was allowed.
 
Porn heavy...yup ba chika wa wa......Anything works in that.

You know...I can't do it. I sat there one night and said "self...you're going to sit here and you are going to write a scene. Son is in the shower, mom is going to hop in with him, suck on him and he is going to fuck her against the wall, why? Who the fuck cares?

I couldn't do it. I just kept saying why would she do it? What would motivate her? Did dad die and she is too nervous with other men? Did dad cheat and she is just out of her mind for some sick revenge? Does she need to get pregnant?

There is seriously something wrong with me. MY latest mother/son is a damn novel at 41k:rolleyes:

Well if I knew anything about your politics I'd accuse you of being a stick in the mud conservative. ;)

I mean it's honestly nothing wrong with you. I can just turn it on and off at will. It really only bothers me if your sticking point is something really fucking dumb in the grand scheme set up thus far. I mean I have a friend who won't doesn't like Terminator because a machine should have perfect aim. They can actually see where the bullets are going and adjust without fixing the sites, don't breath, don't get tired, probably don't react from the recoil much if at all, yadda yadda yadda. He has no problem with a time traveling robots trying to kill threats before they become threats but the fact that it misses is a sticking point.

That kind of shit gets you slapped. Not being able to get spontaneous incest to work is fine. I don't fault you for that. What I'd fault you for is if she walks into the shower, climbs in and when I mention his twelve inches of cock then you're like NOPE that could never happen.

Ya dig?
 
Well if I knew anything about your politics I'd accuse you of being a stick in the mud conservative. ;)

I mean it's honestly nothing wrong with you. I can just turn it on and off at will. It really only bothers me if your sticking point is something really fucking dumb in the grand scheme set up thus far. I mean I have a friend who won't doesn't like Terminator because a machine should have perfect aim. They can actually see where the bullets are going and adjust without fixing the sites, don't breath, don't get tired, probably don't react from the recoil much if at all, yadda yadda yadda. He has no problem with a time traveling robots trying to kill threats before they become threats but the fact that it misses is a sticking point.

That kind of shit gets you slapped. Not being able to get spontaneous incest to work is fine. I don't fault you for that. What I'd fault you for is if she walks into the shower, climbs in and when I mention his twelve inches of cock then you're like NOPE that could never happen.

Ya dig?

I would only call you out on the 12" of cock if it spurted "thick white ropes of semen"
 
I would only call you out on the 12" of cock if it spurted "thick white ropes of semen"

I ended a RP when the guy kept bragging about cock size. I mean come on 18" long and 7 inches thick is just over the top. What woman would want something that size in her.
 
I ended a RP when the guy kept bragging about cock size. I mean come on 18" long and 7 inches thick is just over the top. What woman would want something that size in her.

Sizable...best word in my opinion, let's the reader decide based on what that would mean to them. Average woman would most likely think 8 maybe 9 size queen would think 10+, but point is they figure it out.

The thick ropes of semen....there is an author here that uses that, kills me.
 
The problem with 18 inches, I imagine, I mean aside from it just not being very functional. I mean that's a weapon not a cock is that it's not attractive. I mean sure I say I like big tits and the more the better. What's more is I fucking mean it. But someone posted a story idea (it's probably still on the front page) and yes there is actually a certain amount of tit that is too much.

I've heard ropes of semen before and. . . it was an odd visual. I tend to think more in spurts, spouts, eruptions. It's not silly string.
 
I was 17 when I graduated...same with a sister and cousin. In fact, being a Sept baby, the cousin was 17 when he started college too.
 
The problem with 18 inches, I imagine, I mean aside from it just not being very functional. I mean that's a weapon not a cock is that it's not attractive. I mean sure I say I like big tits and the more the better. What's more is I fucking mean it. But someone posted a story idea (it's probably still on the front page) and yes there is actually a certain amount of tit that is too much.

I've heard ropes of semen before and. . . it was an odd visual. I tend to think more in spurts, spouts, eruptions. It's not silly string.

Ropes of Cum...enjoy!
 
I used a variation of it in my story, "The Accidental Text".

I sealed my lips around his cock as I felt his groin lurch uncontrollably. I enthusiastically gulped down multiple ropes of my son's hot semen as I watched his eyes roll up in his head. I couldn't believe how much and how forceful it was. I could feel each individual blast as it rocketed through his shaft. I didn't want it to end.
 
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