WickedEve
save an apple, eat eve
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Re: Tuesday
Now that it's much quieter, and I've given the poem the time it deserves, I see that it really is a fantastic poem--with my comments only. It would be nice to have a few comments from others. And I see that Liar's poem doesn't have many comments either.WickedEve said:Okay, more poems are now up.
The first one is an E poem:
eel skin bound
by annaswirls ©
set out, propped up by reputation
onion skin eyelids filter more
when open wide, pupil slit narrows
and tongue flicks the air for a taste
of the pressurized jasmine
that sends the signal
there is nothing worth biting here
Read and comment. I would comment but I'm not sure how I feel about it yet. Of course, it's noisy here with the elves. Anyway, get started with this poem and I'll return when it's quieter.