ICM8781
Chasen Strange
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Hello All,
I wrote a short and submitted it recently. It's about a first meeting, and I'd really like some feedback. I am currently writing another one, possibly longer, that I want to participate in the valentines contest with. Any feedback would be great, but constructive feedback would be preferred, LOL. Thank you in advanced. It's a quick read, only 2 pages long, and focuses on the action, not the story.
http://www.literotica.com/s/sexy-short-ethan-and-lana
I wrote a short and submitted it recently. It's about a first meeting, and I'd really like some feedback. I am currently writing another one, possibly longer, that I want to participate in the valentines contest with. Any feedback would be great, but constructive feedback would be preferred, LOL. Thank you in advanced. It's a quick read, only 2 pages long, and focuses on the action, not the story.
http://www.literotica.com/s/sexy-short-ethan-and-lana