JackLuis
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I have a hard time writing Short Stories, my first tale ended with 40 chapters!
I started a new series, "Horner Springs Retirees", I tried to write 1 &2 as character introduction, not much sex,
Then in #3 & 4 I let the Main Character dip his wick, several times.
In Chapter 5 I introduce the other half of the characters.
Since the story is about the Human Sexuality Institute at Futter University it has different approach to hooking up.
http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1019186&page=submissions
Scores are over 4 so I think I did OK, but I was wondering if the storyline is believable?
I started a new series, "Horner Springs Retirees", I tried to write 1 &2 as character introduction, not much sex,
Then in #3 & 4 I let the Main Character dip his wick, several times.
In Chapter 5 I introduce the other half of the characters.
Since the story is about the Human Sexuality Institute at Futter University it has different approach to hooking up.
http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1019186&page=submissions
Scores are over 4 so I think I did OK, but I was wondering if the storyline is believable?
