Dark_Dark_Knight
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Hello - after years of reading and enjoying this website and having some ideas I wanted to share, I have written my first story. The story is about 3000 words, and the plot centers around a young female student brought up in a conservative family who is discovering her sexuality, through a coworker at school who becomes her Daddy. There is a D/s element and the specific sexual content is mostly about her sucking cock for the first time. The first half of the story is entirely background and build up and I hope to add more chapters.
Looking for an editor who is mainly focussed on grammar and such, and is open to offer ther opinion on pace and perhaps an idea here or there to make the story more interesting. I do know that editors are volunteering so I do want to thank anyone in advance who have helped not just myself but anyone who have contributed the content we all enjoy.
-Ryan
Looking for an editor who is mainly focussed on grammar and such, and is open to offer ther opinion on pace and perhaps an idea here or there to make the story more interesting. I do know that editors are volunteering so I do want to thank anyone in advance who have helped not just myself but anyone who have contributed the content we all enjoy.
-Ryan
