Old 04-09-2018, 06:19 PM   #376
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TOUCH, DESIRES, WANTS

I need touch
The feeling that gives goosebumbs when the right spot is manipulated. The teasing that comes when certain areas are tickled. How goosebumps feel as they begin to form as a result of...touch.

I have desires
Thoughts that manifest into dreams. Too powerful to even share. Writing them down would not give them justice. Only rejecting them into mere words. Words that devalue their explosive nature causing only to leave it's magnitude to only be left...as a desire.

There are wants
Wants that has me up at 1 and 2am that has stirred up in me feelings. Cravings unexplored. That something within that makes a woman say mmmmmmmmm. What has captured me the most is the awesomeness of wonder. That sweet and savory taste of....wants.
Love it!

I feel like a chat are you online?

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Old 04-09-2018, 07:39 PM   #377
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Love it!

I feel like a chat are you online?

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Hiya Uggg! What's up coconut?
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Old 04-09-2018, 08:04 PM   #378
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Hiya Uggg! What's up coconut?

Have replied to your PM. Lol just for the record, where I live that term is used as a racial slur against Polynesians so it makes me feel kinda weird that you called me that.

I know you didn't mean it that way though because you're lovely. Just letting you know.

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Old 04-09-2018, 09:20 PM   #379
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Have replied to your PM. Lol just for the record, where I live that term is used as a racial slur against Polynesians so it makes me feel kinda weird that you called me that.

I know you didn't mean it that way though because you're lovely. Just letting you know.

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Oh no! Never did I mean it in that way. It's a common thing I say. It rhymes with what's up. I will stop saying that immediately. Again, I apologize.

Well, I never would have known until I was informed here. Thank you so very much.

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Old 04-09-2018, 09:24 PM   #380
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Oh no! Never did I mean it in that way. It's a common thing I say. It rhymes with what's up. I will stop saying that immediately. Again, I apologize.

No need to apologize BCC, I know you too well to think you are the kind of person to use a term like that in a derogatory way, and I doubt there are that many Polynesians living over your side of the USA eh?

I was just letting you know, not telling you off
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No need to apologize BCC, I know you too well to think you are the kind of person to use a term like that in a derogatory way, and I doubt there are that many Polynesians living over your side of the USA eh?

I was just letting you know, not telling you off
Im wondering how many polynesians care? As a man of Polynesian descent I call my boys cocnuts and spear-chukkas regularly....
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Old 04-09-2018, 10:32 PM   #382
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Im wondering how many polynesians care? As a man of Polynesian descent I call my boys cocnuts and spear-chukkas regularly....
I guess it depends (like many such slurs) on whether or not you have ever had it directed at you with such malicious hostility that you've never forgotten the negative connotation.

I'm sure there are many Polynesian people who wouldn't be offended but there are some that are (some that are my good friends) so why risk hurting them.

BCC is my friend and I know that she would not want to accidentally hurt someones feelings so that's why I told her about the way that term is sometimes used.

Welcome to my thread, by the way, I don't believe we've met.

Do you write poems?

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I guess it depends (like many such slurs) on whether or not you have ever had it directed at you with such malicious hostility that you've never forgotten the negative connotation.

I'm sure there are many Polynesian people who wouldn't be offended but there are some that are (some that are my good friends) so why risk hurting them.

BCC is my friend and I know that she would not want to accidentally hurt someones feelings so that's why I told her about the way that term is sometimes used.

Welcome to my thread, by the way, I don't believe we've met.

Do you write poems?

Uggg
I used to write poems these days I spew horrendous spiels of politicized garbage, its truly sad, I dont really bother trying to sit and write these days its too painful to look at the end result

I think context makes things a lot softer than they would otherwise be without the spittle flecked lip curled derision most things that are attempted to upset people are spat out with.

See her greeting comes across as jovial, friendly and endearing, you've just politicised her greeting to a poi nt where she now has to conciously choke off her thoughts less they offend.

I dont mean to lecture but context makes a massive difference, having to constantly regulate yourself crushes spontenaiety and feom my perspective really breaks down the fundamental structure of joyus commujnication.

Constantly worrying about offending and being offended turns us inward and creates moral panic loops.

Just my 2cents
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Old 04-09-2018, 11:23 PM   #384
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I used to write poems these days I spew horrendous spiels of politicized garbage, its truly sad, I dont really bother trying to sit and write these days its too painful to look at the end result

I think context makes things a lot softer than they would otherwise be without the spittle flecked lip curled derision most things that are attempted to upset people are spat out with.

See her greeting comes across as jovial, friendly and endearing, you've just politicised her greeting to a poi nt where she now has to conciously choke off her thoughts less they offend.

I dont mean to lecture but context makes a massive difference, having to constantly regulate yourself crushes spontenaiety and feom my perspective really breaks down the fundamental structure of joyus commujnication.

Constantly worrying about offending and being offended turns us inward and creates moral panic loops.

Just my 2cents

Maybe you're right and in truth I did think twice before I posted that message but I think that if I was in BCC's shoes I'd want to know if something I was saying could be taken the wrong way and potentially offend someone.

I agree with you regarding context but I prefer not to be ignorant.
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I can still be jovial and light without the word coconut. It's ok, really. In certain areas, it's a negative connotation to an educated Black person too. It is all on the way it was meant or used. I thank you both on your views.

So, todski28, welcome to this thread *smiling* I invite you to stick around and possibly "dare" you to stir up your creative juices to write a poem and leave it here. I'm not rushing you. At your convenience, please...I am happy you decided to drop by, no matter what the reason may be of your visit 🌹

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Old 04-10-2018, 03:37 PM   #386
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Away

I'm sorry I've not been around
I've been spending time elsewhere
Mainly with a love I've found
But I've not forgotten you I swear

I've had a month or more of learning
It's been a fun old trip
But especially today I had a yearning
To pop on here and rhyme a bit

So to all my friends upon this thread
I'm sorry I've been away
Especially 3g this must be said
I promise you im here to stay.
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Old 04-10-2018, 04:16 PM   #387
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I'm sorry I've not been around
I've been spending time elsewhere
Mainly with a love I've found
But I've not forgotten you I swear

I've had a month or more of learning
It's been a fun old trip
But especially today I had a yearning
To pop on here and rhyme a bit

So to all my friends upon this thread
I'm sorry I've been away
Especially 3g this must be said
I promise you im here to stay.

Its okay snexy,

I have seen whats been going on with you and L.G. and I'm happy to give you your space. You are always welcome here and you know where to find me.

Thanks for the poem.

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Old 04-10-2018, 05:35 PM   #388
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Faces, hands and hearts

She was the shy girl and I was entranced.
Red hair, secret smiles and sudden blushes, unconscious flushes.
Green eyes that flashed, before quickly being averted.
An innocence that was doomed to be perverted.

He was unconsciously graceful and I had a crush.
Clever and quick witted, book smart but into street art.
Sporty and popular, large hands, biceps and thighs.
They all thought him straight but I'd met his eyes.

I played chess with her and she won.
She recommended books for me that I read, laying at night, in bed.
One day I felt a crazy rush in my heart, I said something stupid...
and she smiled, something wonderful had it's start.

He bought me a drink in some dark inner city bar,
We could barely hear each other talk but his hotel room wasn't far.
His lips claimed mine on the way back to his place.
It was quick, rough and unsatisfying and when I left I felt disgrace.

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Old 04-13-2018, 07:53 PM   #389
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Something a little raunchy to finish off the week:

Pussy with a penis

I had to be gentle with her,
She had vulnerable eyes,
Soft feminine curves
And and smooth cum slick thighs.

With her legs spread akimbo
and her back arched with grace,
I lay myself upon her
And we made love face to face.

Her tiny little breasts
Thrust up to meet my lips,
As her little man clity
Swelled down by our hips.

I had her whimpering softly,
involuntary delight.
Her intense eyes sparkling,
running mascara but bright.

As it reached its climax
we couldn't hold it in.
She lay there quivering happily,
smiling a radiant grin.

Good girl Pet,
You did just fine.
Keep pleasing Sir like that,
and you will always be mine.

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Old 04-14-2018, 12:21 PM   #390
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And so, a few poets are returning. There's been some changes in the programing. Hopefully to your favor and flavor.

Poetry will be my next experiment. I was once blind, but now I see.

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Old 04-14-2018, 05:44 PM   #391
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For Caramel who kinda asked and ugg because why not

Fuck it
and fuck you
its 3am
and your hand slid down grasping me
pulling me out of slumber
the hot
breath as you take me
from soft sleep
to awake
raging hard with need

whispered promises
alive with the delivery of
hip thrusting depth

i grab a fistful of hair*
force myself a little deeper
into your throat
then drag you away from your
morning feast

I roll you*
guide you to the edge of the bed
slide into your*
morning glory
your toy on the bed next to you
as if taking your own pleasure
wasnt enough you demanded mine as well

(Greedy bitch I smirk)

as I set to work
sliding into morning desperation
into a need so fierce
it aroused at some ungodly hour
demanding satisfaction be sacrificed
on the alter of fuck

slick with the slather
of toyed up cum
you're frictionless
and already coming again

(greedy bitch I smirk)

your insides fire against me
gripping sucking me in
awake to my own weakness
i slip out
hands in your hair
pulling it back
the rough gentles that makes you drip
I slide two finger in holding you face down
I ram till you quiver screaming again

(Greedy bitch I smirk)

breath the ragged gasps of*
help me*
your body alive*
dancing hips lost in a trainwreck
you slump to your side groaning
laughing at the chemical insanity and overload

(greedy bitch i smirk)

Yoi draw me*
in
gravity
magnetism
animal instinct*
or simply fuck

I hook your legs onto my shoulders*
pinning you to the bed
grab your wrists in one hand
pick up your toy
shake my head as you whisper
no I dont think I can
I'm too
the word sensitive cuts out
under the shuddering
as i tease your clit
your ass resting on my thighs
I slip in deep
feeling the vibrations rip through
you spasm a little
jerking onto my cock
impaled stasis

a rippling tidal wave surges through
you gush
covering me in
your wet dripping*
insanity

I take to it
slamming my cock
in and out*
there is no friction
the bulge of my hardness
taken full
stretching you
as you grasp onto me
screaming a hoarse throated yes
yes
yes
you cum one last time

I pull out
hot wet splatters shoot out
raining down
onto your tits
your navel
down your inner thighs

you lay there
quivering mess
the sweet scent of cum and sex
drifting up

430am
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For Caramel who kinda asked and ugg because why not

Fuck it
and fuck you
its 3am
and your hand slid down grasping me
pulling me out of slumber
the hot
breath as you take me
from soft sleep
to awake
raging hard with need

whispered promises
alive with the delivery of
hip thrusting depth

i grab a fistful of hair*
force myself a little deeper
into your throat
then drag you away from your
morning feast

I roll you*
guide you to the edge of the bed
slide into your*
morning glory
your toy on the bed next to you
as if taking your own pleasure
wasnt enough you demanded mine as well

(Greedy bitch I smirk)

as I set to work
sliding into morning desperation
into a need so fierce
it aroused at some ungodly hour
demanding satisfaction be sacrificed
on the alter of fuck

slick with the slather
of toyed up cum
you're frictionless
and already coming again

(greedy bitch I smirk)

your insides fire against me
gripping sucking me in
awake to my own weakness
i slip out
hands in your hair
pulling it back
the rough gentles that makes you drip
I slide two finger in holding you face down
I ram till you quiver screaming again

(Greedy bitch I smirk)

breath the ragged gasps of*
help me*
your body alive*
dancing hips lost in a trainwreck
you slump to your side groaning
laughing at the chemical insanity and overload

(greedy bitch i smirk)

Yoi draw me*
in
gravity
magnetism
animal instinct*
or simply fuck

I hook your legs onto my shoulders*
pinning you to the bed
grab your wrists in one hand
pick up your toy
shake my head as you whisper
no I dont think I can
I'm too
the word sensitive cuts out
under the shuddering
as i tease your clit
your ass resting on my thighs
I slip in deep
feeling the vibrations rip through
you spasm a little
jerking onto my cock
impaled stasis

a rippling tidal wave surges through
you gush
covering me in
your wet dripping*
insanity

I take to it
slamming my cock
in and out*
there is no friction
the bulge of my hardness
taken full
stretching you
as you grasp onto me
screaming a hoarse throated yes
yes
yes
you cum one last time

I pull out
hot wet splatters shoot out
raining down
onto your tits
your navel
down your inner thighs

you lay there
quivering mess
the sweet scent of cum and sex
drifting up

430am
Todski!

Now I know you told me a lie! You didn't 'used to write poems'- You write poems!

I loved it. Hot, honest and so charged I feel like I could run a vibrator on it!

More please!

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Old 04-14-2018, 06:16 PM   #393
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Todski!

Now I know you told me a lie! You didn't 'used to write poems'- You write poems!

I loved it. Hot, honest and so charged I feel like I could run a vibrator on it!

More please!

Uggg
I should probably fix the spelling mistakes in this one first

Thanks for the kind comments
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I should probably fix the spelling mistakes in this one first

Thanks for the kind comments
Nice Todski28 💐 that was a bit explosive🎆smiles....thank you, of course you're welcome to post more if you'd like🌹
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Old 04-17-2018, 06:36 AM   #395
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Thoughts on Being Black

Why do people hate?
Why do people choose to discriminate?
Why does darker skin colors possess such a tragic fate?
Why does talking about it make it an area no one wants to navigate?
Why is doing something about it not an avenue people WANT to relate?
Why hate crimes based on color so accepted and not called what it is, terrorism...are thoughts to vacate?
What makes this type of racism, even in it's most subtle forms, so easy to replicate?

Why is a hue of color we have no control over so offensive?
When asking others to consider the ways race discrimination has damaged our society, why do people refuse to be pensive?
Why does acknowledging change needs to happen cause people to get defensive?
Why isn't the idea of accepting theories and thoughts of others who may be a little different more conducive?
Why is it sports figures, artists and entertainers combining together to acknowledge obvious wrongs considered obtrusive?
Doesn't having power and control over a group of people, what they can and can not do, seem a bit abusive?
Why is it acceptable for those put in this position to be submissive?

We were never created this way
It's an adopted attitude that should be, with the reading of this, changed today
It is sad, but support for this way of thinking will unravel or fray
What good will one post make, what opinions will sway?
All I'm asking is not to be counted as 3/5ths but a whole person with a mind as a way to repay
Reparations would be too much from since the 1500s...a repayment with a MAJOR delay
For now, an acknowledged apology and fair hiring/pay practices is what I'll say.

https://youtu.be/5x74ftt8T9Q

For things to really catch hold to happen, I'm not putting money on it.

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Old 04-22-2018, 07:50 AM   #396
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What? Did I just kill this thread? Wow, I'm sorry Uggg. Was this a bit too serious a matter to have on here? I just reviewed what was happening all over and acknowledged it in a poem here.

Every time I venture out, I experience it either subtly or more blatant...in your face. Not everyone is privy to what I go through. Everything is not always nice, fun, flirty and fleeting.

I guess I'll tame it down. I don't want the interest in posting here, on this thread, to be because of me.

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What? Did I just kill this thread? Wow, I'm sorry Uggg. Was this a bit too serious a matter to have on here? I just reviewed what was happening all over and acknowledged it in a poem here.

Every time I venture out, I experience it either subtly or more blatant...in your face. Not everyone is privy to what I go through. Everything is not always nice, fun, flirty and fleeting.

I guess I'll tame it down. I don't want the interest in posting here, on this thread, to be because of me.
Lol, nothing like that, Ive been trying to figure out how to respond to your piece without coming across as a dick, or insensitive, also it's made me think a lot about a heap of different things from my perspective
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My Own Journey

I've learned some in my years
There is PLENTY I need to learn
Certain things reflect in my mood
I wish things were different, I say
Some things stay the same
I guess I am searching
Searching for that something
Things that may have eluded me
That need to be fulfilled

The dust is clearing
I'm still in the land of nowhere
Trying to find my way to serenity
It is there, at least I believe it is
Isn't that what life really is
A journey
Making yourself the focal point
Yet it is hard to stay focused

Keeping on track
We all have our issues
We trip and stumble
No one is perfect
I'm not looking for bandaids
A willingness to care maybe
A spark or ignition to inspire

I want opportunity and progress
I want self doubt to lower
I'm searching for confidence
How to obtain it and use it
Stopping the depression takeover
Finding success and enjoy it

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Lol, nothing like that, Ive been trying to figure out how to respond to your piece without coming across as a dick, or insensitive, also it's made me think a lot about a heap of different things from my perspective
I meant the loss of interest.

It's ok. Say what's in your heart. Not everything is nice. A rose colored glasses world exists only in children's eyes, until reality comes crashing in to take over.
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What? Did I just kill this thread? Wow, I'm sorry Uggg. Was this a bit too serious a matter to have on here? I just reviewed what was happening all over and acknowledged it in a poem here.

Every time I venture out, I experience it either subtly or more blatant...in your face. Not everyone is privy to what I go through. Everything is not always nice, fun, flirty and fleeting.

I guess I'll tame it down. I don't want the interest in posting here, on this thread, to be because of me.
Poetry is raw and often serious. You know my thoughts. We've talked on this.
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I meant the loss of interest.

It's ok. Say what's in your heart. Not everything is nice. A rose colored glasses world exists only in children's eyes, until reality comes crashing in to take over.
^^this.
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