Looking for an editor for my 2nd story

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newcple78

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• Mar 7, 2018

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Its short and as of now a rough draft-loving wives type story.

 

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EquinoxRising

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Is it "burn the bitch"? "Burn the bastard"? "Wife does what husband wants"? A cuckold tale? A Wittol tale? Is there BDSM, straight sex, gay sex, abuse, humiliation, gang bang? None of the above?

 

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EquinoxRising said:

Is it "burn the bitch"? "Burn the bastard"? "Wife does what husband wants"? A cuckold tale? A Wittol tale? Is there BDSM, straight sex, gay sex, abuse, humiliation, gang bang? None of the above?

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Hotwife/straight sex

 

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BitchyatTimes

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