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TheBigLove126

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• Jun 12, 2013

• #2,851

"Hazy Night with Taylor Swift"

http://www.literotica.com/s/hazy-night-with-taylor-swift-ch-10

Dan & Taylor are alone together for the first time in months.

Comments are encouraged, I want to know what people think of this chapter and the whole series in general.

 

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phantasy19

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• Jun 20, 2013

• #2,852

My first story is doing really well
I'm a writer by trade, and when my partner had to work abroad for a while I would write her stories about us that went down very well.

So i thought I'd give it a go, and here it is:

http://www.literotica.com/s/anniversary-present-14

It's doing well, but obviously I'm always looking to improve. My speciality is loving couples, tense build ups and, as time goes on, I will move into more taboo areas.

Would love it if you guys could let me know what you think, I'm always happy to give feedback as well.

 

CeasarBoobage

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• Jun 22, 2013

• #2,853

My latest story, Paying a Football Debt, is about a husband and wife texting dares to each other while at a friend's house. Betting on the football game determines who does what.

Even though it's in the LovingWives section, there is no cheating, cuckolding, or revenge in it, just a husband and wife getting frisky!

Please let me know what you think via the comment fields.

http://www.literotica.com/s/paying-a-football-debt

 

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LOAnnie2

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• Jun 25, 2013

• #2,854

New Story: Token of Appreciation

Private School student's body used as a gift to a rich donor.

http://www.literotica.com/s/token-of-appreciation

Feel free to comment.

 

slyc_willie

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• Jun 28, 2013

• #2,855

TnT, a twisted story of incest and murder

The first part of TnT posted today. It is an eight-part series in the Erotic Horror section that centers around a pair of incestuous twins, Talon and Thorne, who develop a murderous habit. Check it out if you're in the mood for something dark-hearted, creepy, and violent. But there's also a romantic side to the story.

TnT Chapter 1

 

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CarolinaPeach

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• Jun 28, 2013

• #2,856

http://www.literotica.com/s/sex-tv-a-game-show

Exhibitionist/voyeur

Sex TV: A Game Show

Marissa shows it all in front of a live audience.

This story is based on a Japanese game show I came across while wandering around the web.

 

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BadKat135

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• Jul 2, 2013

• #2,857

Carnival Chapter 1

http://www.literotica.com/s/carnival-ch-01

This is my new story. I would really appreciate some feedback on it to help me in writing chapters 2 and 3. Thanks all.

 

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TheBigLove126

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• Jul 2, 2013

• #2,858

http://www.literotica.com/s/hazy-night-with-taylor-swift-ch-11

Dan & Taylor look through the window and get a huge surprise.

http://www.literotica.com/s/hazy-night-with-taylor-swift-ch-12

On the Dan before the big party, Dan meets a new girl and is reunited with two others.

http://www.literotica.com/s/stood-up-5

A young waitress and her boyfriend "comfort" Victoria Justice after she was stood up by her blind date.

 

PennLady

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• Jul 7, 2013

• #2,859

I've just had a new story post: http://www.literotica.com/s/lessons-learned-14

It's a lesbian romance, and feedback is welcome.

 

zoelikesjam

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• Jul 15, 2013

• #2,860

http://www.literotica.com/s/winterthur-love

I am wondering if i should make this in to a series, I would love feedback on it! Thanks

 

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DarkPulse

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• Jul 16, 2013

• #2,861

Looking for more critical feedback and opinions for my story. It's proven popular so far, very popular actually, but I like to get some indepth comments and hear what people think.

The story is "Going Feet First" in the sci-fi/fantasy section. It's about a soldier sent from vietnam to a fantasy world. There are currently 3 chapters, 10-12 lit pages each.

http://www.literotica.com/s/going-feet-first

 

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CarolinaPeach

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• Jul 16, 2013

• #2,862

This is the first installment of a six part Romance story that starts in a toy store.

Any feedback would be welcome.

http://www.literotica.com/s/karens-tale-ch-01

 

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MJ10

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• Jul 18, 2013

• #2,863

Loss and Remembrance

Hi all.

MJ10 here. Just wanted to alert everyone to my recent story "Loss and Remembrance". It's a paranormal romance, in the sense that the protagonist has yearnings for the ghost of her dead boyfriend. But it's more than that. It's a story about love, mortality, and the power of memory. Personally speaking, I consider this one of my best works ever, but a lot of the credit should go to editor Takemeawaymylove for "midwifing" it--proofing for punctuation, grammar and all the little things people do before sending their labors of love into the world.

The full story can be found here: http://www.literotica.com/s/loss-and-remembrance. What I'm interested in is constructive criticism. I grappled a bit with the tenses, especially with the dream sequences/sex scenes, but any advice I can receive is greatly appreciated. I want the next story to be even better than this one, and anything that helps me do that is awesome.

FYI, this was half-written on my ailing laptop and iPad, so any errors in line spacing and indentation are completely my own. Thanks in advance for all the kind words, and look forward to your responses.

 

lovecraft68

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• Jul 19, 2013

• #2,864

My latest went up today more family fun and what I feel is a new spin on a previously done premise.

Porn Shoot with my sister.

Alicia will do anything to save the house; even her brother.

http://www.literotica.com/s/porn-shoot-with-my-sister

 

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SophieHewitt

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• Jul 20, 2013

• #2,865

A Brand New Trick

My second submission to this site has been published and I'm curious to see what others think of it.

http://www.literotica.com/s/a-brand-new-trick

It's a little different than the first story I submitted, but I do tend to vary my themes a little anyway. I look forward to submitting a lot more work in the coming weeks.

Sophie xx

 

Last edited: Jul 20, 2013

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clownprince2008

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• Jul 22, 2013

• #2,866

My first attempt at a sequel. It's another celebrity story about Emma Watson. I've tried to inject with a sense of realism. It'll let you decide whether it worked or not. For your convenience, I added a linked to the first story too, but the sequel also works on its own.

http://www.literotica.com/s/emma-9

http://www.literotica.com/s/emma-ch-02-3

 

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DeYaKen

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• Jul 22, 2013

• #2,867

O.K. Here is my latest offereing

http://www.literotica.com/s/guardian-angel-3

Make of it what you will. I know of a few errors where the text was changed fro first to third person. This is entirely my fault, not of my editor.

 

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AE_Maccailin

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• Jul 23, 2013

• #2,868

Hello everyone!

I've recently posted my very first story here on Literotica. It's titled "First Time With Erin" and, of course, it's listed under First Times.

It's about a magical summer day when Val finds his best friend's sister alone by the pool.

Here's the link: http://www.literotica.com/s/first-time-with-erin

I hope you all enjoy it and I look forward to your comments and feedback

 

thelovingsadist

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• Jul 25, 2013

• #2,869

My first story is up. All feedback and comments are welcome.

http://www.literotica.com/s/a-wolfes-reward

 

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CarolinaPeach

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• Jul 25, 2013

• #2,870

This is chapter three of Karen's Tale (romance category) and all your waiting pays off in this chapter.

http://www.literotica.com/s/karens-tale-ch-03

Any and all feedback is greatly welcomed.

 

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Thistlethorn

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• Jul 26, 2013

• #2,871

New Story

I've a new story set in the same world as The Pearl. It's called Driving the Last Spike and the first two chapters are up.

http://www.literotica.com/s/driving-the-last-spike-ch-01

http://www.literotica.com/s/driving-the-last-spike-ch-02

The first two chapters don't have any erotica and it does help to know the characters from The Pearl. Feedback and constructive criticism welcome. Enjoy.

 

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kinkydreams667

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• Jul 30, 2013

• #2,872

Hi Gals and Guys,

How are you doing?

I have posted second part of an Indian Erotic story. You are welcome share your comments...

http://www.literotica.com/s/an-orgy-...us-villa-ch-02

Looking forward to hear...

TC
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lucifer_hardcock

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• Aug 5, 2013

• #2,873

Size queen story.

Just put my third story up about a woman who discovers the joys of a well endowed lover.

Feedback appreciated.

http://www.literotica.com/s/from-princess-to-queen

 

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dannyboy111

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• Aug 8, 2013

• #2,874

New Story: Daddy Needs His Blowjob

I've just completed a multi-part story. Now that the twelfth and final chapter is posted, I hope that more people will give it a shot from beginning to end.

Here's the story in a nutshell. The narrator is married to a beautiful woman with an equally beautiful daughter. In Chapter One, the daughter inadvertently witnesses Mom giving stepdad a mindblowing blowjob while acting out a Daddy roleplay. Soon, the daughter is watching the show every night in full view of stepdad (yet outside mom's view) while teasing the shit out of him: doing a striptease, pantomiming giving head, and on and on.

Mom finds out Daughter is watching and doesn't mind. In a gradual progression over several chapters, stepdaughter becomes more and more involved in her mom and stepdad's sex play. The climax is as you might expect: stepdaughter joins mom and dad in a new threeway arrangement that changes the household permanently.

The story has a lot of teasing and gradual escalation, but there is plenty of action en route to the eventual resolution.

Here's the link:

http://www.literotica.com/s/daddy-needs-his-blowjob-ch-01

 

soflabbwlvr

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• Aug 13, 2013

• #2,875

New Story

My latest story, Pussy Rules, went up today. It's in the Fetish category and features themes of FemDom and NonCon. If you like women who are large and in charge, then this one is for you.