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Thank you Tzara. ---%---<@
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Champy, awesome! You make me want to do a glosa and I've never wanted to do one before (that, and I can't remember how to write them). 
Everyone, that's some good poetry all around in every thread that's bumped with a poem.
Everyone, that's some good poetry all around in every thread that's bumped with a poem.
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Thank you!!! You know UYS has a teach in thread?Champy, awesome! You make me want to do a glosa and I've never wanted to do one before (that, and I can't remember how to write them).
Everyone, that's some good poetry all around in every thread that's bumped with a poem.
I look forward to reading your piece.greenmountaineer
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Champy, awesome! You make me want to do a glosa and I've never wanted to do one before (that, and I can't remember how to write them).
Everyone, that's some good poetry all around in every thread that's bumped with a poem.
I’m still working on ....Dirty Magazine which I love but will have to read a few more times.
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In Cherries' ongoing 007 run, Goodbye July, provides a fitting sendoff to the month.
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Thank you, Piscator. I enjoyed reading your last 5 senses poem. Yours and Champs.
I posted it in fantasy/sci/fi even though it is basically a 5 page poem most fun I've had writing in a long time
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Acknowledgements
I'm not sure where the old thread went but I thank Harry and mer for their kind comments on Turkey Dump and gm for the same for Les Demineurs
I'm not sure where the old thread went but I thank Harry and mer for their kind comments on Turkey Dump and gm for the same for Les Demineurs
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annnnnnnnd thirded. unique line, so visual!
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You did good, really enjoying your poems. Congratulations on taking it to the line limit.
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I'ma stuffed, butters made ham and chicken pie, yum. So, superstitions...
I knew a person that would leave a room immediately if there was a doll in it. Musta seen some bad Ju Ju
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I'ma stuffed, butters made ham and chicken pie, yum. So, superstitions...
I knew a person that would leave a room immediately if there was a doll in it. Musta seen some bad Ju Ju
You did good, really enjoying your poems. Congratulations on taking it to the line limit.
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I'ma stuffed, butters made ham and chicken pie, yum. So, superstitions...
I knew a person that would leave a room immediately if there was a doll in it. Musta seen some bad Ju Ju
I'm jealous I love a good chicken pie!
I was looking here for inspiration
https://www.huffingtonpost.com/bruce-wilson/most-americans-1829-years_b_4163588.html
I wonder if I could keep it to 25 lines though lol
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It’s an interesting concept looked it up, because gm paints some interesting pictures
As well as conceptualisations
Though it could be argued that I engage in sophistry when analysing poetry
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Thanks, tod. I can be rather sophistic too.
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Thanks,, Harry. I meant to write "solipsistic." Of course anything that comes out of a solipsist's mouth, he considers sophistry
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