Editor Required - Article explaining my fetish

Hello all,

I have been a literotica fan for circa 15 years and have only just started posting having previously been writing my own sex related blog which was unfortunately hacked. Decided to start posting here instead being a safer platform to my mind and one with a ready made community around it.

I am currently having troubles writing a piece to explain my fetish for female flatulence, which certainly isn't everyone's cup of tea but would really appreciate a second pair of eyes to edit it and give me some sagely advice, as currently I don't feel the flow is right and there is something missing which I can quite put my finger on.

Thanks in advance.

Kind Regards
Unnaturaldesire

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Thanks for the tip

Still looking for some help with this