I wrote a story....((the shower))

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I wrote a story....looking for an editor to check it out.

Wrote a story.
But last time I did I was told I really needed an editor. Is anyone nice wanting to volunteer?
Its not super long. Maybe a 5 page PDF.
But could really use the input.

Story concept is a guy named Nick has a jealous wife Jenny. And she goes out of town for the weekend. Well his really hot friend Tasha asks if she can take a shower at his house. And then...well you will have to read it....
 
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Wrote a story.
But last time I did I was told I really needed an editor. Is anyone nice wanting to volunteer?
Its not super long. Maybe a 5 page PDF.
But could really use the input.

Story concept is a guy named Nick has a jealous wife Jenny. And she goes out of town for the weekend. Well his really hot friend Tasha asks if she can take a shower at his house. And then...well you will have to read it....

5 page PDF means nothing. A word count does. That is important as a guide to how long it will take.
 
My story

5 page PDF means nothing. A word count does. That is important as a guide to how long it will take.

Estimate around 3500-4000 words. Its printed in medium font. And the 5 pages is not double sided.
 
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