I posted this, my second submission a few days ago. It does seem to have been received quite favorably. Having said that I also realize that I am no writer and apart from the many grammatical errors I would also love to hear any criticisms and feedback on the overall story, plot and general style.
I didn't avail myself of an editor, a mistake I feel in hindsight so I've posted this thread to in part and in someway to remedy that fact.
It is in Erotic couplings section and the link is: https://www.literotica.com/s/photoshoot-3
Thanks in advance.
I didn't avail myself of an editor, a mistake I feel in hindsight so I've posted this thread to in part and in someway to remedy that fact.
It is in Erotic couplings section and the link is: https://www.literotica.com/s/photoshoot-3
Thanks in advance.