Sammael Bard
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<I'M NOT TAKING ANY MORE STORIES FOR FEEDBACK. DON'T PILE UP YOUR REQUESTS>
I closed down the last thread because...well, it was freakin' huge and I made a few lousy critiques that embarrasses the hell out of me.
Anyway,
If you're looking for a different perspective on your story, you can post your request here.
Please post the URL to your story here, so that I don't have to hunt down the entire site to find your work.
I read stories from almost any category, but I don't read stories with poop/scat or piss being used as a fetish. Sorry, but it's not my thing. I also don't review anything with hard-core Gay Male sex. Unless you're patientlee, I won't. Anything with loose Bisexual Male will do, but no hard-core GM story, please.
I usually comment on the plot, writing style and character development. I don't comment on the grammar, but if I do, you should understand that it must've been clunky enough to catch my attention.
Starting from this year, I've decided to vote according to Lit standards, which means:
1 star - I hated it.
2 star - I didn't like it much.
3 star - Liked it - Keep on writing.
4 star - Really Liked it - Good Read!
5 star - Loved it! One of the Best!!
Also, please don't forget to tell me if you need my critique on a specific area in your story. It'll help me if I know where to focus beforehand.
I take time for pelting out my heavenly wisdom, so if it's something that you need me to look after immediately, I suggest that you open a new thread in the Forum, or ask some other critic hanging in here. I don't promise a time-frame or anything like that.
For those of you lurkers in here, you can help the author in question by providing your own review, in here or in private. Just be nice. People are here to improve their writing. So if you can't help them, don't bother posting either. I really appreciate someone taking the time to criticize a story or my point, but please be constructive.
Regards,
Bard.
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