NoCorrelation
Experienced
- Joined
- Jun 9, 2012
- Posts
- 31
Hi,
I'm after feedback for a story I've written. It's just appeared in the BDSM category, but I'd like more feed back than a little comments box allows.
It's a story about a submissive getting a text from their Mistress, and preparing for the night. It ends just after the Mistress enters. There's no sex. There will be no second part.
I'd be interested to know what people think of it.
And it's a strange question, but I'd like to know what gender you think the submissive is. I wanted it to be unclear, but I don't know how well it worked.
Anticipation - https://www.literotica.com/s/anticipation-1004
I'm after feedback for a story I've written. It's just appeared in the BDSM category, but I'd like more feed back than a little comments box allows.
It's a story about a submissive getting a text from their Mistress, and preparing for the night. It ends just after the Mistress enters. There's no sex. There will be no second part.
I'd be interested to know what people think of it.
And it's a strange question, but I'd like to know what gender you think the submissive is. I wanted it to be unclear, but I don't know how well it worked.
Anticipation - https://www.literotica.com/s/anticipation-1004