T toetyper Experienced Joined Jun 30, 2008 Posts 81 Jan 29, 2018 #1 too short? https://www.literotica.com/s/the-mcdonalds-truce
D DKerr8047 Virgin Joined Nov 19, 2017 Posts 7 Jan 29, 2018 #2 I didn’t mind the length, but I hope there’s more to cum
ElectricBlue Connoisseur Joined May 10, 2014 Posts 15,398 Jan 29, 2018 #3 toetyper said: too short? https://www.literotica.com/s/the-mcdonalds-truce Click to expand... Yes. So short, my single word response was too short! I understand that the telling of the story is important to you, but to make it a story for others to engage with, there needs to be a lot more story telling.
toetyper said: too short? https://www.literotica.com/s/the-mcdonalds-truce Click to expand... Yes. So short, my single word response was too short! I understand that the telling of the story is important to you, but to make it a story for others to engage with, there needs to be a lot more story telling.