Non-consent story plus a sequel

https://www.literotica.com/s/the-ravishment-of-young-judy

The sequel was supposed to be named True Confession but there are other stories with the same name so it was changed for me (picking truly original titles can be a challenge).

https://www.literotica.com/s/confession-46

This is the church described in the second story:

https://farm9.staticflickr.com/8292/7811467300_f7278caf4e_b.jpg

gunhilltrain said:

https://www.literotica.com/s/the-ravishment-of-young-judy

The sequel was supposed to be named True Confession but there are other stories with the same name so it was changed for me (picking truly original titles can be a challenge).

https://www.literotica.com/s/confession-46

This is the church described in the second story:

https://farm9.staticflickr.com/8292/7811467300_f7278caf4e_b.jpg

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Overall pretty good. I caught a couple grammatical mistakes and an awkward phrasing or two, but the overall thrust of the story I thought was effective, the kind of nervous awkwardness that can sometimes accompany sexual exploration.

Well done!

Thank you.

I don't really have experience with role-plays; I just guessed and made up these stories about games. In this case the female partner is more comfortable with it because she is the one enacting a version of her fantasies.