MichaelinChina
Cybergypsy
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- Mar 28, 2012
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I swear if she doesn't shut her fucking mouth I'm going to shove something in it. M thought as he stood rigid with his back to her. How could someone so annoying turn him on so much he wondered. There she goes again, that's it. He practically ripped his hard cock out of his chef pants turned around and thought was deed. The look of surprise in her eyes turned to fascinated delight as she clamped down on him teeth bared. When she had his full attention she smiled. Now the real dance would begin. Who dominates? Who submits? Who cares as long as she starts sucking. He pushed his hips forward and she opened up. He kept his forward momentum until she began to gag and reached up to grasp his shaft. As he slowly withdrew her tongue cupped him and she brought her mouth around him. With warm caresses from her tongue and a tug on his hips she told him to fuck her mouth. He smiled down at her. With pleasure, he thought and thrust himself across her tongue while she applied just the right amount of resistance. The beautiful silence. Best five minutes of his life.
Well that's my 200 words. Don't know if it'll make anyone cum but I know who I'd be straddling if I had the equipment.
I've never had someone write a story about and FOR me before and on a thread.
That makes it rather special.
I'm sorry if it appeared as if I was singling you out - for your enjoyment of that story. I'm pleased you did. I think we agree on that point.
I don't recall the original story. and I have no inclination to go looking for it way back whenever it was posted.
Had I noticed it then, I for one; others could care less I believe, would have tut-tutted about its length.
I think the beauty and the challenge is to write a piece in less than 200 words that will have the reader (almost, if not) climaxing.
Perhaps:
"Fuck me!" he whispered in her ear as she reached for the cereal box on the top shelf of the crowded supermarket.
might, in its brevity, have the reader excited and fantasising like crazy.