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I'm currently writing a story about a brother/sister couple. As I'm progressing into it, I am realizing that it is predominantly a love story. Yes, there is sex (fingers crossed that it's HOT sex) but the real story is the LOVE, the relationship.
This is going to be a long one too (not sure how long yet). Will there be interest here for a long, incestous love affair story? Is there some unwritten romance vs hardcore banging ratio I should be aware of?
I have to write this story the way the characters have come to me but I do want to be aware of my audience's preferences.
Thanks for any info you can provide.
Also...can I get away with not saying boob/dick size outright? It's just a personal preference of mine. I get pulled back from a story when I see something like "She walked with her 36-DD tits bouncing in the breeze" or " She pulled out his 9 3/4 inch cock from his pants". I get that some people like the visual but does it need to be there in every erotic story? Can I leave that out and just mention the sensations of using said assets as a way of telling size?
"So, do you ever take that off?" I asked.
"Hardly ever. But for you, I will."
And Mel set her clothes aside, and came to me naked in splendor.
[end of scene]
Putting in Measurements is really amateurish, unless you're doing it (as I sometime do) for humorous effect.
If you can genuinely pull off an incest story where the reader senses real romance, you'll have done well. But it should definitely go in Incest.
No.
Plenty of pro sites list measurements and more, including shoe size and dress size. I get a better sense of the celebrity knowing she's 200 pounds, 5-9, and 41D-32-45.
(Though I would read a story with a 9 3/4" cock if, and only if, somebody nicknamed it "The Hogwarts Express".)
Really?? What about the IQ score? Or does that not get you off?
You aint gotta agree, but measurements are commonly used.
But not for dicks and cup sizes - the mark of the amateur. I'd say stay away from that too. Now if you're talking ammo, be specific for sure. Important to know if it's .45 or just a weaselly .22 - or, god forbid, a 20mm Lahti AP round.
As for category, romance or not, if you stick it anywhere but incest, you're going to get trashed. And I just put a romance in Incest and it's rated pretty well, and got some lovely comments, so just go there. It's where it belongs.
Length - my one is 9 LIT pages (30,000 words or so) if that's any help. Long is all relative anyhow so you'd have to be a bit more specific.
The sex - it is LIT. You do need to get to explicit sex sometime. On the other hand, I have a series going in First Time where in chapter 1, which was 3 LIT pages, all they did was kiss and it's still rated at 4.58 (it was a pretty hot kiss....).
Will there be interest here for a long, incestous love affair story? Is there some unwritten romance vs hardcore banging ratio I should be aware of?
First off...hi, all! I'm Eva. Long time lurker, first time poster. *crowd says "Hi, Eva!"*
Anyway.
I'm currently writing a story about a brother/sister couple. As I'm progressing into it, I am realizing that it is predominantly a love story. Yes, there is sex (fingers crossed that it's HOT sex) but the real story is the LOVE, the relationship. This is going to be a long one too (not sure how long yet). Will there be interest here for a long, incestous love affair story? Is there some unwritten romance vs hardcore banging ratio I should be aware of?
I have to write this story the way the characters have come to me but I do want to be aware of my audience's preferences.
Thanks for any info you can provide.
First off...hi, all! I'm Eva. Long time lurker, first time poster. *crowd says "Hi, Eva!"*
Anyway.
I'm currently writing a story about a brother/sister couple. As I'm progressing into it, I am realizing that it is predominantly a love story. Yes, there is sex (fingers crossed that it's HOT sex) but the real story is the LOVE, the relationship. This is going to be a long one too (not sure how long yet). Will there be interest here for a long, incestous love affair story? Is there some unwritten romance vs hardcore banging ratio I should be aware of?
I have to write this story the way the characters have come to me but I do want to be aware of my audience's preferences.
Thanks for any info you can provide.
The best descriptor of a woman's physique I recall reading was by P J Wodehouse:
“She looked as if she had been poured into her clothes and had forgotten to say 'when'.”
In songwriting, it's called "show it, don't tell it." We're not writing a newspaper article stating facts and figures, we're creating a movie in the reader's head. (If only I was a good enough writer to actually take this advice. )
If I'm writing a certain character, and I'm writing it through his eyes using his voice, and HE DOES think in terms of measurements? Bet your ass there'll be a measurement in there. Lots of them.