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Old 07-14-2015, 03:47 PM   #3101
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Smokey here

Hey all, Smokey here having returned. I took a small break from writing recently and a LOOOOONG break from posting about the new stories here. Not sure how much attention this thread is getting lately, from the looks of things, but I thought I would still throw out an update for anyone who may be interested. Most recently, my story "Lesbionage" has been published (http://https://www.literotica.com/s/lesbionage), and it is looking like either tomorrow or Thursday, hopefully my next will be up. It will be entitled "Through Thick And Thin," a tender romantic story of love (and lovemaking), in contrast to "Lesbionage," which was pure torture. I am still alternating between those two 'genres.' Will possibly see about making some more updates in the future. —Smokey
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Old 07-15-2015, 07:19 PM   #3102
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Do you like stories about busty virgins getting dick from their cousin's boyfriend?

Sadly, I just have the one story about a singular busty virgin getting dick from her cousin's boyfriend. Sorry, the other ones couldn't come due to scheduling conflicts. You might enjoy it anyway.

Title: Nellie, Chapter One

Category: Erotic Couplings

Description: "I want you to have sex with my cousin." "What the shit?"

Tags: Big tits, female virgin, 18 year old, coed, first time, missionary, doggy style, cowgirl, fingering, couple

Link: https://www.literotica.com/s/nellie-ch-01

Last edited by Pinchbeck : 07-15-2015 at 07:25 PM. Reason: Forgot the link.
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Old 07-17-2015, 09:12 AM   #3103
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My latest story is titled 'Switchback' and relates the desperate fundraising event devised by a fictitious college sorority. The story straddles the BDSM/reluctance categories, and, while there is bondage, there is no pain/punishment play and the explicit sex content is low. I devote most of the 3500 words to preliminaries and resolution.

https://www.literotica.com/s/switchback

Most of my stories include power exchange themes (M/f, F/m, F/f) and I try to explore characters' motivations and D/s aspects more than physical play.

Comments/questions/opinions are always appreciated.
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Old 07-20-2015, 10:24 AM   #3104
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The latest chapter - part 4 - of The 7-Day Challenge is up.

Hope you like it!

https://www.literotica.com/s/the-7-day-challenge-pt-04
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Old 07-20-2015, 08:11 PM   #3105
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Chasing Cindy - Part One

Hey all! Hope this is the right place to post this. I got a little help in one of the forum rooms, so I'm crossing my fingers that I'm doing this right! Anyway, here's my first lit story link...

https://www.literotica.com/s/chasing-cindy-pt-01

Shape shifter Cindy is forced to go on the run with the bouncer at the bar she works at when a pimp wants to make her his. She will give herself to her savior and fight tooth and nail to stay free. Nobody will put her in a cage without a hell of a fight!


Enjoy!

And please don't be unkind to me if by any chance I screwed up where I was supposed to post this.
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Old 07-21-2015, 11:30 AM   #3106
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I've got a story in need of some love: https://www.literotica.com/s/love-potion-ch-01

Wild lesbian romance between an elf and a troll set in the Warcraft universe
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Old 07-25-2015, 11:57 AM   #3107
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Chasing Cindy - Part Two is out!

I'm thrilled to release the second part of Chasing Cindy.

The plot thickens as shape shifters Cindy and Logan are relentlessly pursued by the evil pimp who will stop at nothing to claim her as his own. There is a cliffhanger on this one! But I will be submitting the final installment in the next day or so. Enjoy! And I love to read your comments!

https://www.literotica.com/s/chasing-cindy-pt-02
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Old 07-27-2015, 10:50 AM   #3108
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Chasing Cindy - Part Three (this is the final installment)

https://www.literotica.com/s/chasing-cindy-pt-03

Yay! Here is the finale in this short series. Logan must save his mate from the clutches of the evil pimp Ricardo in this (hopefully) thrilling ending. I welcome your comments and of course, you're votes...lol.
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Old 07-30-2015, 08:40 PM   #3109
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Idunn's Apples

Hello all.
My latest story, Idunn's Apples, is posted at https://www.literotica.com/s/idunns-apples in the romance category. It is pseudo-historical.
After Morag's father is slain while fighting the Viking invaders, she is shocked to learn the king has turned her lands over to those same barbarians. What fate awaits her?
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Old 08-03-2015, 04:54 PM   #3110
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First Submission from a new writer

Hi,

I'm very new at this and have only just found this thread.

So without further waffle I would like to draw your attention to my first attempt at an erotic story:

https://www.literotica.com/s/plaything-33

It has received a mixed reception, which I expected, and many people have told me that it should have been listed under "Science Fiction" and not Lesbian Sex. However on checking through the Medical and Surgical details included it turns out that none of them are actually fictitious! So where does this leave the story?
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Old 08-08-2015, 03:48 PM   #3111
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Chapter 5 of the 7-Day Challenge is up.

https://www.literotica.com/s/the-7-day-challenge-pt-05

Almost done.

Chapter 6 will be the finale!
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Old 08-16-2015, 10:44 AM   #3112
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My newest story is out! Sexy bikers and a leading lady with a twist.

Thought I would do a story this time around with all human characters instead of submitting a paranormal story like I did last time. I got a great response with views and votes to my Chasing Cindy story, and I'm hoping that everyone enjoys this one too. If you like bikers and a sexy strip tease, then I think you'll like Nomad's. No cliffhangers!

https://www.literotica.com/s/nomads
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Old 08-28-2015, 02:53 PM   #3113
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New Writer

I'm a long-time reader of romance and erotica but a new writer.
This is my first attempt at a sexy, D/s story:
https://www.literotica.com/s/welcome-home-sir-1

Any feedback is greatly appreciated.
Thanks!
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Old 09-02-2015, 01:25 PM   #3114
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Smokey's next

Hey all, greetings once more. It's been a while, little more than a month and a half, actually, but I have FINALLY finished writing, editing, polishing and submitted my newest story. It's called "How To Punish A Vindictive Boss," pretty self-explanatory from the title, and yes, is more glorious lesBDSM. According to the usual pattern of Lit submissions, it should probably be up on Friday, 9/4. If not, I'm sure it'll be one of the very next days. Either way, do keep an eye out for it! Thanks, STB
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Old 09-03-2015, 01:50 AM   #3115
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New Story, "The Shoot".

Hi everyone.

Haven't posted anything in a while but I have a new short story up called "The Shoot".

https://www.literotica.com/s/the-shoot-5

Fans of exhibitionism might enjoy it

PLEASE give it a look and let me know what you think.

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