Old 04-05-2011, 02:10 PM   #101
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But he knows her mind
And makes her beg for her drug
Then he fills her need
collapsing on knees
begging, pleading.. pretty please?
doughy eyes glisten
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Old 04-05-2011, 03:14 PM   #102
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Old 04-06-2011, 03:14 AM   #103
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Old 04-06-2011, 03:35 AM   #104
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Old 04-06-2011, 01:54 PM   #105
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Aching drives the need
Sweet torment pleasure's own creed
And to him I cede

Body for his use
Desirous to amuse
Gifted with his bruise

I am claimed by him
His ribbon around my limb
Held still at his whim

Taken completely
His marks laid out so neatly
The pain more sweetly

Teased by strands of silk
A moan from me he will milk
A need for his ilk

This remains no game
The hunger in me he'll tame
Igniting his flame

As he pounds my flesh
Two into one we do mesh
Desire afresh

Blinding crescendo
Absence of innuendo
His demands I know

His word I await
Nothing will attenuate
My suspended state

Crying out "oh please"
Seeking, praying for release
Held there without ease

Under his control
Strong as the magnetic pole
Climax his to dole

Whimpering, pleading
A fear of "no" exceeding
He is there leading

Taken to apex
Body's shuddering reflex
Lacking in complex

And his whispered word
Climax no longer deferred
Greater joy he spurred

His need not sated
His yearning only bated
Flesh to flesh grated

Claiming me harder
Together rising our ardor
Still again harder

Fingers digging deep
As he climbs up his own steep
And down again sweep

Our bodies entwine
Peace and happiness combine
Joy from his word: "mine."
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Old 04-06-2011, 02:04 PM   #106
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Aching drives the need
Sweet torment pleasure's own creed
And to him I cede

Body for his use
Desirous to amuse
Gifted with his bruise

I am claimed by him
His ribbon around my limb
Held still at his whim

Taken completely
His marks laid out so neatly
The pain more sweetly

Teased by strands of silk
A moan from me he will milk
A need for his ilk

This remains no game
The hunger in me he'll tame
Igniting his flame

As he pounds my flesh
Two into one we do mesh
Desire afresh

Blinding crescendo
Absence of innuendo
His demands I know

His word I await
Nothing will attenuate
My suspended state

Crying out "oh please"
Seeking, praying for release
Held there without ease

Under his control
Strong as the magnetic pole
Climax his to dole

Whimpering, pleading
A fear of "no" exceeding
He is there leading

Taken to apex
Body's shuddering reflex
Lacking in complex

And his whispered word
Climax no longer deferred
Greater joy he spurred

His need not sated
His yearning only bated
Flesh to flesh grated

Claiming me harder
Together rising our ardor
Still again harder

Fingers digging deep
As he climbs up his own steep
And down again sweep

Our bodies entwine
Peace and happiness combine
Joy from his word: "mine."
This is beautiful...I love it. You are such a poet.
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Old 04-06-2011, 03:10 PM   #107
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each night to sleep between wires
song training begun

in reverent hush
audience captivated
melodious song
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Old 04-06-2011, 03:16 PM   #108
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Make me a sandwich
She complies
don't be ravenous
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Old 04-06-2011, 03:26 PM   #109
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this haiku is non-standard.
slurping spaghetti
noodles sliding between lips
stripped bare he will wait
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Old 04-07-2011, 12:00 AM   #110
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cook pasta ill serve it now
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this haiku is non-standard.
You lack only kigo and kireji!
Your onji works for me
And, ummm... these are in English.
Aren't they all non-standard?
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Old 04-07-2011, 12:22 AM   #111
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Happiness in me
Say this in a French accent
My Pleasure revealed
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Old 04-07-2011, 01:48 AM   #112
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Happiness in me
Say this in a French accent
My Pleasure revealed
son membre dans vous
son plaisir est partagé
moi, heureux pour vous

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Old 04-07-2011, 12:11 PM   #113
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The strength of his hands
Pinning my wrists to my back
As he makes me beg
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Old 04-07-2011, 08:28 PM   #114
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son membre dans vous
son plaisir est partagé
moi, heureux pour vous
Je suis heureux de partager mon plaisir avec vous!
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Old 04-07-2011, 08:33 PM   #115
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Knowing I did wrong
wanting to be discovered.
Punishment awaits.
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Old 04-08-2011, 04:01 PM   #116
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Knowing I did wrong
wanting to be discovered.
Punishment awaits.
eyes drenched in chagrin
advancing, his jaw is clenched
ready for what's next?
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Old 04-08-2011, 04:08 PM   #117
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The strength of his hands
Pinning my wrists to my back
As he makes me beg
please let me please you
whimpers trickle from her lips
her world fades away
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Old 04-08-2011, 06:51 PM   #118
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please let me please you
whimpers trickle from her lips
her world fades away
His wants overtake
Oblivion consumes her
She yields to his will
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Old 04-08-2011, 07:07 PM   #119
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His wants overtake
Oblivion consumes her
She yields to his will
his mouth then opens
articulations commence
voice her puppeteer
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Old 04-10-2011, 02:53 AM   #120
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Onesies...

Justifiably
autoerotically
undeniable
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Old 04-10-2011, 02:59 AM   #121
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Justifiably
autoerotically
undeniable
I know I am right
to do these things on my own
I can't not do them...
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Pulling on the clamp
You wield power over me
Ecstasy of pain
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to do these things on my own
I can't not do them...
addiction to touch
compulsive narcissism
luscious surrender
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Old 04-10-2011, 05:34 PM   #124
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addiction to touch
compulsive narcissism
luscious surrender
Why thank you, CIC - you make it sound like the fun it is, instead of naughty misbehaviour
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Old 04-11-2011, 10:12 PM   #125
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cold March wind raped me/ hearts stuck on a sticky cloud / warm April rain love
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