WriterOfRomance
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Hello!
So I've already submitted a few chapters of my story to Literotica. And we all know how that goes; The second it's published, you see all the spelling errors and paragraphs you thought you deleted.
So, before I resubmit, I'd like to do a real rewrite. The main area I'd like to focus on is the build up between my characters and the evolution of their relationship. Right now, it's a little wham bam thank you ma'am.
My story is a fantasy world where the main characters are a elven priestess and human captain of the guard. She gets on the king's bad side and the captain doles out her punishment.
Thanks in advance!
Below is a link to chapter one as is.
https://www.literotica.com/s/spanking-of-an-elf-priestess
So I've already submitted a few chapters of my story to Literotica. And we all know how that goes; The second it's published, you see all the spelling errors and paragraphs you thought you deleted.
So, before I resubmit, I'd like to do a real rewrite. The main area I'd like to focus on is the build up between my characters and the evolution of their relationship. Right now, it's a little wham bam thank you ma'am.
My story is a fantasy world where the main characters are a elven priestess and human captain of the guard. She gets on the king's bad side and the captain doles out her punishment.
Thanks in advance!
Below is a link to chapter one as is.
https://www.literotica.com/s/spanking-of-an-elf-priestess
