UnderYourSpell
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Well it works with the words in the right place but IMO far too many 'ar' words to make it comfortable reading. What does anyone else think?
Teach-in .... a choice
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Well it works with the words in the right place but IMO far too many 'ar' words to make it comfortable reading. What does anyone else think?
pelegrino
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that's the whole point! And it's for singing (as well as reading)
UnderYourSpell
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Sorry I don't understand ........ you don't want it to make a comfortable read?
pelegrino
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comfort was not the first thing on my mind, having fun on one syllable was! Especially sounding it in various pitches. I felt quite comfortable with it.
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arcomfort was not the first thing on my mind, having fun on one syllable was! Especially sounding it in various pitches. I felt quite comfortable with it.
did it sound like a pirate?
Long far star, refill my jar.
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for youdouble-eek!
wtf?
near, possibly, and as annie mentions it rhymes with the cockney pronunciation but all my life as an english bird 'lawn' has rhymed with 'born' and 'gone' with 'on' . . . very different!
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/North_American_English_regional_phonology#Mid-Atlantic_English
and for the record one decision I had to make was how many syllables (I do pay attention to that shit, sometimes) in Baltimore, since it was heading towards - three, if I was heading out it would have been two (bawl mer)
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well, not on exact syllabic terms, but you have a fine ear for sound, 1201, and a devilish skill to come very near to what one is imagining while writing!
His lust for her consumes his days and nights
Captive of abiding karnal desires
Yearning for the slightest of delights
His lust for her consumes his days and nights
Taken her in matrimonial rites
Assumptions unfold as their love expires
His lust for her consumes his days and nights
Captive of abiding karnal desires
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ball-ti-more.
no wonder some people have issues with spelling.
yeah, i know there're some weird briticisms but we understand the rules of getting around the nonsensical.
Precum
Glistening droplet of precum
Titilation's little reward
A portent you shall soon succumb
Glistening droplet of precum
Drizzled upon finger then tongue
Silky taste that can't be ignored
Glistening droplet of precum
Titilation's little reward
(I bent the rules a little with "tongue" and originally had "thumb" but didn't like it)
Glistening droplet of precum
Titilation's little reward
A portent you shall soon succumb
Glistening droplet of precum
Drizzled upon finger then tongue
Silky taste that can't be ignored
Glistening droplet of precum
Titilation's little reward
(I bent the rules a little with "tongue" and originally had "thumb" but didn't like it)
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Inside That One Dorm Room
After I took my shower, I went into Laura's dorm room
To let her know that it was her turn
Only to see her do something in front of a computer screen.
She was naked and watching porn on that screen
While fingering herself which made me step into the room
And touch her on the breast before she made her head turn.
And when she saw the hard-on I got, she made herself turn
Around and suck my petrified dick while I watched the porn on the screen
And hope to God that nobody gets a shock by coming into the room.
After we fucked ourselves in that room, I made myself turn my head and see us on the screen.
After I took my shower, I went into Laura's dorm room
To let her know that it was her turn
Only to see her do something in front of a computer screen.
She was naked and watching porn on that screen
While fingering herself which made me step into the room
And touch her on the breast before she made her head turn.
And when she saw the hard-on I got, she made herself turn
Around and suck my petrified dick while I watched the porn on the screen
And hope to God that nobody gets a shock by coming into the room.
After we fucked ourselves in that room, I made myself turn my head and see us on the screen.
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In A Wet T-shirt And Panties
I got home to hear the shower
Running and went into the bathroom
To see a girl in a wet t-shirt and panties.
And after she placed her hand on those panties,
I walked in and turned off the shower
Before I let myself drag her out of the bathroom.
Then, after I tossed her wet things back into the bathroom,
I got naked and showed her something better than wet panties
By fucking her pussy just like with other girls after a shower.
After that, she promised to not take a shower in the bathroom with panties on.
I got home to hear the shower
Running and went into the bathroom
To see a girl in a wet t-shirt and panties.
And after she placed her hand on those panties,
I walked in and turned off the shower
Before I let myself drag her out of the bathroom.
Then, after I tossed her wet things back into the bathroom,
I got naked and showed her something better than wet panties
By fucking her pussy just like with other girls after a shower.
After that, she promised to not take a shower in the bathroom with panties on.
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I Saw My Roommates Naked In Bed
When I got out of the shower,
I saw my roommates naked in bed
And enjoying their round of lesbian sex.
That was before they stopped having sex
To see how hard my dick got even after a shower
And invited me to join them on that bed.
After they licked on my dick, I laid on that bed
Long enough for the girls to take turns having sex
With my cock until they got drenched in a cum shower.
Then, I took another shower after being in bed and having threeway sex.
When I got out of the shower,
I saw my roommates naked in bed
And enjoying their round of lesbian sex.
That was before they stopped having sex
To see how hard my dick got even after a shower
And invited me to join them on that bed.
After they licked on my dick, I laid on that bed
Long enough for the girls to take turns having sex
With my cock until they got drenched in a cum shower.
Then, I took another shower after being in bed and having threeway sex.
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What She Was Hungry For
I saw her looking at me with hungry
eyes and both hands on her chest
like she was waiting to one hard fuck.
I got behind her and started to fuck
her asshole because I was also hungry
to feel more than her skin on my chest.
Then, she moved those hands from her chest
and down to my butt which made me fuck
her harder to stop herself from being hungry.
Yes, she was hungry to touch my chest and fuck.
I saw her looking at me with hungry
eyes and both hands on her chest
like she was waiting to one hard fuck.
I got behind her and started to fuck
her asshole because I was also hungry
to feel more than her skin on my chest.
Then, she moved those hands from her chest
and down to my butt which made me fuck
her harder to stop herself from being hungry.
Yes, she was hungry to touch my chest and fuck.
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Me And That Flasher Babe
While walking in the park, I saw this babe
being naked under an open coat and getting
ready to fuck herself with a small red dildo.
That made me get undressed and take that dildo
away from her before I grabbed that hot babe
by the butt and give her a fuck she should be getting.
But while I was making sure that her pussy was getting
such a hard fuck, this one car colored exactly like the dildo
had drove itself right past both me and the flasher babe.
I should've figured that babe would be getting me into trouble with that dildo.
While walking in the park, I saw this babe
being naked under an open coat and getting
ready to fuck herself with a small red dildo.
That made me get undressed and take that dildo
away from her before I grabbed that hot babe
by the butt and give her a fuck she should be getting.
But while I was making sure that her pussy was getting
such a hard fuck, this one car colored exactly like the dildo
had drove itself right past both me and the flasher babe.
I should've figured that babe would be getting me into trouble with that dildo.
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