Bramblethorn
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Hey, can I trouble anybody for feedback on my Halloween contest entry?
http://www.literotica.com/s/red-callum-sweet-cate
http://www.literotica.com/s/red-callum-sweet-cate
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Well, I think everything is working in your favor with the exception of the scheme. Being a long winded piece without a change up in the rhythm, a monotony begins to settle in. Otherwise, it was very imaginative and entertaining.