Feedback on Past Works

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You might want to zero in on one story (your best, your worst?) or you're going to get scattergun responses. The likelihood of a bunch of randoms all picking the same story to consider is pretty remote - a discussion around one story is probably more useful for you and more interesting for us.

Focus in on a particular something - other than proof reading and consistent tenses - they're your job as the writer to get right, and if you know that already, you don't need others to tell you.

You've got a good number of Red Hs, so your readers reckon things are mostly okay - you're doing something right .