adelelawrus
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I want to write a story like this because it's something that I don't see often here. Usually when you see cheating stories here, the husband knows about it and approves or is some sort of cuckold (cum drinking, etc.). I want to write a more realistic, but darker story.
Story will be told at first from the perspective of main male character (let's call him Jay). Jay is married to a nice woman. Jay has a best friend. Best friend has a fiancee who is hotter than Jay's wife. As you can guess, Jay starts sleeping with best friend's fiancee through whatever series of events. Best friend is unaware of course. The thing is, I want Jay to be a real asshole about it, but I also want to write a character where you can understand why he cheated, without demonizing his wife. I want to get deep into the emotions of it all. I want the best friend to find out about the cheating eventually and be very hurt by it, but agree to take the fiancee back, but I want Jay and the fiancee to keep having sex behind his back. Possibly he will catch them a few times and the cycle will repeat itself, with him becoming more weary and sad as time goes on. And the wife will eventually find out and be hurt by it also. Jay has no feelings of real love for his friend's fiancee, he just wants sex with her because she is 'hot'
Essentially, i want to write a true betrayal story that is somewhat realistic, similar to things I have seen on some talk shows in real life, but I'm wondering if this is the type of thing that people will read.
Story will be told at first from the perspective of main male character (let's call him Jay). Jay is married to a nice woman. Jay has a best friend. Best friend has a fiancee who is hotter than Jay's wife. As you can guess, Jay starts sleeping with best friend's fiancee through whatever series of events. Best friend is unaware of course. The thing is, I want Jay to be a real asshole about it, but I also want to write a character where you can understand why he cheated, without demonizing his wife. I want to get deep into the emotions of it all. I want the best friend to find out about the cheating eventually and be very hurt by it, but agree to take the fiancee back, but I want Jay and the fiancee to keep having sex behind his back. Possibly he will catch them a few times and the cycle will repeat itself, with him becoming more weary and sad as time goes on. And the wife will eventually find out and be hurt by it also. Jay has no feelings of real love for his friend's fiancee, he just wants sex with her because she is 'hot'
Essentially, i want to write a true betrayal story that is somewhat realistic, similar to things I have seen on some talk shows in real life, but I'm wondering if this is the type of thing that people will read.