Beta Reader for a Romance Story

Hi,

Well, the title pretty much says it all. I'd like to have a fresh pair of eyes take a look at a short story that can go in either the Romance or Mature sections.

It will be about 3 literotica pages in length and is complete.

Feedback and general impressions would be appreciated.

Thanks!

Sure, I'd be happy to look at it., shoot me a PM. I have Windows so word/rtf/txt/in email are fine.

Axelotto

sure...

I will read it...send it in a pm