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Old 06-21-2012, 04:21 PM   #1
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Question Weird Feedback...

I got the weirdest feedback on my new chapter of "A Dramatic Change", I'll copy and paste it for complete accuracy:

Comments: mnnhgggnnnnhhhhhh

Well that isn't exactly constructive feedback... do you think it is meant to be complimentary or just someone being stupid? I just don't know what to make of it.
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Old 06-21-2012, 05:02 PM   #2
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I do believe that is someone writing down the sound they make when they reach climax.
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Old 06-22-2012, 06:02 PM   #3
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I had hoped that was what it was, in which case I shall take it as being compilentary. Thanks for the second opinion Dude :-)
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Old 06-22-2012, 06:04 PM   #4
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I got the weirdest feedback on my new chapter of "A Dramatic Change", I'll copy and paste it for complete accuracy:

Comments: mnnhgggnnnnhhhhhh

Well that isn't exactly constructive feedback... do you think it is meant to be complimentary or just someone being stupid? I just don't know what to make of it.
at least it isn't a death threat ... at least i don't think it is ...
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Old 06-22-2012, 06:05 PM   #5
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tha'ts some good feedback! lol I don't think I've gotten one like that yet!
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Old 06-24-2012, 03:00 AM   #6
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Yeah I've been quite fortunate, in so far as I have always got quite good, or at least constructive feedback on my work, a fair few fellow-authors have been nice enough to sign their feedback too so I know who its come from and value it even more.
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Old 07-14-2012, 08:52 PM   #7
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Rodney?

I read the story and really like it but it is supposed to be a prompt for name story and there is a bunch of Rodney's in the threads? It makes it really hard to follow.
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Old 07-14-2012, 09:02 PM   #8
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I got the weirdest feedback on my new chapter of "A Dramatic Change", I'll copy and paste it for complete accuracy:

Comments: mnnhgggnnnnhhhhhh

Well that isn't exactly constructive feedback... do you think it is meant to be complimentary or just someone being stupid? I just don't know what to make of it.
I think it is positive feedback is looks like a worded moan or orgasm!
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Old 07-14-2012, 09:03 PM   #9
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Or the person could have been having a seizure. No joke it can happen at any time!
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Old 07-18-2012, 02:53 AM   #10
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Lol Loquere, I've decided to take it as someone reaching climax, but I wouldn't flatter myself by thinking my writing could get someone so hot & bothered that they might seize up, but thanks for the thought

Jakelyon, it's true the story does jump about a bit, I added break-away characters to spread the readers view of what's happening in the infected world, as the protagonist has been isolating himself in fear. I have tried to segway as smoothly as possible into the break-away chapters but I understand that the sudden change in perspective might confuse the reader.

I've done it with more than just Rodney though he might be the most confusing of them; the others are quite clearly NOT the protagonist, whilst Rodney doesn't have such a clear distinction. I may need to look over those chapters again…

Thanks for the feedback though, it’s always appreciated.
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Old 07-18-2012, 04:58 PM   #11
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good story

Well it is a nice story so I would take it as a compliment.
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