I love to write erotic poetry and stories!!! Let me know what you think!!!!!

GreyKnight45

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Listen up cause I am only going to say this once:
Babe I need you like air!!!!!
Just the smell of you
Desire builds a fire
The sound of your voice
Music to my ears!!!
The heat from your kiss
Leaves me a breathless mess!!!!
The taste of you
Lingers forevermore!!!
The thought of you swaying to a bluesy beat
Brings urgent passion.....
A hunger grows insatiable
Bodies melt into one
Babe you make me crazy like no other...
We move as one
Faster we grind our lust
Passion kisses your Rose
Dew feeds my thirst and hunger...
Moans, gasps and heat
Taking all I have
Nothing more to give
I awake alone
To live forevermore!!!!
 
Listen up cause I am only going to say this once:
Babe I need you like air!!!!!
Just the smell of you
Desire builds a fire
The sound of your voice
Music to my ears!!!
The heat from your kiss
Leaves me a breathless mess!!!!
The taste of you
Lingers forevermore!!!
The thought of you swaying to a bluesy beat
Brings urgent passion.....
A hunger grows insatiable
Bodies melt into one
Babe you make me crazy like no other...
We move as one
Faster we grind our lust
Passion kisses your Rose
Dew feeds my thirst and hunger...
Moans, gasps and heat
Taking all I have
Nothing more to give
I awake alone
To live forevermore!!!!
I think!!!!!

You!!! use !!! too many exclamation marks!!!! for one thing.

Thanks!!! for!!! posting!!!!!!!
 
The exclamation points were there for a reason, read the poem...It is to drive home the point that I need you like I need air!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
The exclamation points were there for a reason, read the poem...It is to drive home the point that I need you like I need air!!!!!!!!!!!!
My!! point!!!!! still!!!!!!!!! holds!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I did read the poem. The overuse of exclamation points kills my any objective appreciation of what you've written.

But, you probably are not writing your poem for me, or for an objective audience. In which case, !!!!!!!!!! away, dude.
 
The exclamation points could be a ruse to subconsciously implant the sensation of sexual climax into the reader's brain.


fap! fap!! fap!!! fap!!!! fap!!!!! squirt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
The exclamation points could be a ruse to subconsciously implant the sensation of sexual climax into the reader's brain.


fap! fap!! fap!!! fap!!!! fap!!!!! squirt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Oh good Lord have I now got spunk on the brain? :(
 
I'm attempting the gin diet and I've lost 4 days already!!!!!!! Oh bugga the dose couldn't have been high enough!!!!!!!!!!! *Reaches for gin bottle*!!!!

I have no gin!!!! Am I doomed???? Let me know if it works!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
I have no gin!!!! Am I doomed???? Let me know if it works!!!!!!!!!!!!

You could possibly substitute Whisky (or Whiskey if you're Irish) and there may be hope for you, as I'm afraid the Gin has not helped at all!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Burp oh pardon me!!!!!! :eek:
 
You could possibly substitute Whisky (or Whiskey if you're Irish) and there may be hope for you, as I'm afraid the Gin has not helped at all!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Burp oh pardon me!!!!!! :eek:

I need more booze!!!! The closest I have right now is Irish Cream!!!!!! That sounds good now that I think about it!!!!!! Maybe it will work, but if not who cares????
 
I need more booze!!!! The closest I have right now is Irish Cream!!!!!! That sounds good now that I think about it!!!!!! Maybe it will work, but if not who cares????

We'll be beshtest friends for ever 'n' ever hic an' exclaim alllllllllllll ooooooverr the plashe!!!!!!!!
 
...and we never even got to the part where we discussed the line

Passion kisses your Rose

It is difficult to ignore the spunktuation marks, though.

Whew just look at this place.

*schedules carpet cleaners for Monday*
 
...and we never even got to the part where we discussed the line

Passion kisses your Rose

It is difficult to ignore the spunktuation marks, though.

Whew just look at this place.

*schedules carpet cleaners for Monday*

Dunno if thats going to cut it you may have to replace the whole carpet.....
and maybe the drapes

:looks at Magnetron and shakes head:
 
Well the poem is wham bam thank you ma'am and as erotic as bunions ........... but the Spunkfest ........ phew!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
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